@christi-eaton
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Christi-Eaton That’s an amazing drawing, but what I really noticed is how much the face looks like yours. Seeing it right next to your profile pic…the resemblance is striking. Other than that she’s not smiling, but if she were I think it would almost match perfectly.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 YES. Much better. *thumbs up* Notice how the details ground you.
And I think it would be really cool for that to be part of Maya’s dream. Go for it. 😀 -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Christi-Eaton thanks. 😉
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
(Forgot to tag on my last reply) 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
Hello Moriah! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! I’m so glad you decided to join Kingdom’s Pen!
I clicked on the link to your website and saw that said that you have taken photos in Uganda, Africa! That is really cool! I’ve actually been to Malawi, Africa last summer on a mission trip.
What kinds of things do you like to write…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Christi-Eaton *squeals* Still love it!
… can I post mine again here for comparison? It’ll make it look awful but I want to see the similarities. Thanks. 😀
*doesn’t wait for permission*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I can’t do anything right now, but I’ll be on later to plan my WIP some more. @daeus
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 5 months ago
@Mark-Kamibaya YES. Rogue One. Everyone. Watch it. The more I think about it, the more sure I may be becoming that it’s my favorite movie ever. Seriously. Everything about it was so well done, and the theme—!
*buries face in hands* Just… watch it. You’ll see what I mean. -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic The Antihero in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yeah, we generally know more general antiheroes than true antiheroes. Probably because, as Christians, true antiheroes can be potentially harmful to us.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic The Antihero in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Your insight on the “unheroic success” character arc is really good. I never thought of it that way. 🙂 Personally, however, I’d see the unheroic success as hard to pull off successfully, but super awesome if done well. Quite a few of my favorite films have unheroic success, so I know it can be done well. A reason why the unheroic…[Read more]
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic The Antihero in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@timothy-young Well, Balaam was actually a pretty nasty dude even from the beginning. His character arc does follow the tragic character more closely, though. And yeah. Joab is definitely a true antihero.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 5 months ago
Never mind. I’ll reply to reviews. At least just a one-liner.
@christi-eaton So glad that somebody absolutely adores the best movie of 2016, La La Land!!!
@daeus Watched that when I was young, and I got bored. Maybe, now that I’m older, I’ll appreciate it.
@f5a8c3e92 Basically, Rogue One is a much watch, huh? -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 5 months ago
Never mind. I’ll reply to reviews. At least just a one-liner.
@christi-eaton So glad that somebody absolutely adores the best movie of 2016, La La Land!!!
@daeus Watched that when I was young, and I got bored. Maybe, now that I’m older, I’ll appreciate it.
@f5a8c3e92 Basically, it’s a much watch, huh? -
Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness. That episode…
While watching that, I don’t think I was sad. I was upset that Moffatt would even think to torture me in such a way…
…and then, when it was all over, I cried. A little.
Which one was it that really made me cry…
Angels Take Manhattan, I think? The one where Amy and Rory…you know.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Cya ’round! @graciegirl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Yes, Sherlock. @hope
Oh my goodness. I can’t pick one.
For Ten, I really liked Donna.
For Eleven, I loved Amy.
For Twelve…well, Clara was and will always be my favorite companion for Twelve.Actually, Clara rivals Amy for my favorite companion in general…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
I knew there was a reason I didn’t like his character at first… @hope
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