@christi-eaton
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 um… Kara? *scrunches her eyes up* Shortish light brown hair… plain face that could be pretty if she smiled… (like most faces. 😀 ) fairly big eyes that are probably somewhere between blue and grey… almost blunt nose… probably fairly large-boned when it comes to build, but not particularly big. She looks bookish to…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I’ve had several people tell me the story sounds cliche, but I’m not sure how… @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
Good… 🙂
Um, I posted an excerpt to the novel I’m working on if you want to read it… @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
Good… 🙂
Um, I posted an excerpt to the novel I’m working on if you want to read it… @dragon-snapper
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Snapper replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 😀 Don’t worry. Dragons don’t like rebellions.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
Pleasetell me that’s a joke. @dragon-snapper
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Snapper replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @theliterarycrusader Looks like I chose our king well. You all are very loyal. 😛 (maybe I won’t go to forum prison for the insurrection.)
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
Hullabaloo indeed. @theliterarycrusader
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Snapper started the topic Happy Easter! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Hi all! Happy Easter!
He is Risen!And the angel answered and said unto the women, Fear not ye: for I know that ye seek Jesus, which was crucified. He is not here: for he is risen, as he said. Come, see the place where the Lord lay. And go quickly, and tell his disciples that he is risen from the dead; and, behold, he goeth before you into…
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Snapper started the topic Happy Easter! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Hi all! Happy Easter!
He is Risen!@daeus @kate-flournoy @jess @ethryndal @that_writer_girl_99 @theliterarycrusader @aratrea @spradlin @jadamae @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm @hope @emma-flournoy @northerner @winter-rose @kina-lamb @rolena-hatfield @clairec @perfectfifths @gretald @his-instrument @christi-eaton @aella @audrey-caylin @feedingmy…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Sorry…I tend to be rather vague when I’m thinking about other things. Just know your response really helped me. @daeus
Erm, quick question– just out of curiosity, how did you and @kate-flournoy picture Kara? Like, her hair color and all that? I don’t have a good picture of her in my head.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy I agree. It’s got a lot of potential to be wibbly-wobbly and twisty-turny in a lot of fun places. (That’s a reference you probably won’t understand, lol)
Oh, themes… I’m still figuring a lot of that myself, unfortunately, but off the top of my head…
–the influence of media on society
–loneliness
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus That’s a good thing, right? Thanks, I think…
Oops, you’ve discovered my secret–I really didn’t want to start writing just yet, but the words came anyway…
Lots of good ideas here, thanks! I definitely think I’ll be able to dig into some of what you’ve suggested.
Ugh, don’t worry, I’m not going in that direction with the elementals.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@northerner You can take me to prison now. *holds out talons and wings for handcuffs* *resolves that they won’t take her without a fight*
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Snapper replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@theliterarycrusader Ah…yeah. I was totally in charge of the insurrection.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Huh, guess I haven’t heard that word enough, and ‘pried’ would work too. 😛
Oh, and I see now how that means only Sawyer, but that was definitely not my first thought. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Coolio.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I found your conflict. Work is getting in the way of writing.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Ooh, nice. Conflict is always nice. 😀
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