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Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
All right Elizabeth.
After the Inciting Incident we have our First Plot Point. What happens here is basically that Kara commits to follow through with what the Inciting Incident set in motion, instead of lapsing back into her former apathy.
She decides that change is in order and sets out to figure out what exactly she needs to do.
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus Have you gotten anywhere close to 1000 takers of your survey?
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Kate Flournoy and
Michael Stanton are now friends 9 years, 4 months ago -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi! @audrey-caylin
I know, right? I hadn’t read anything about the staff yet, so the bio totally caught me off guard.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Thank you. @jane-maree
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m back. I can do stuff without Kate, right? Even though she’s helping me with my story and teaching me along the way.
Oh my goodness, I just–for a reason I don’t know–read through the KP staff “get to know you” page, and @daeus bio cracked me up. I’m sufficiently amused now.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Seriously, if she pops up anywhere… *looks around for Kate* @jane-maree
*edits this because she said Kate one too many times*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Seriously, if Kate pops up anywhere… *looks around for Kate* @jane-maree
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m signing off…someone lemme know if @kate-flournoy pops up anywhere…I’ll technically be around until 10:00… @daeus @jane-maree
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m back, too. My brain sort of…overloaded, so I took an Xbox break, but I’m here now. @daeus @jane-maree @dragon-snapper @anyone else on
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 4 months ago
Seconded. @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Uh, no. I’ll ask if anything crosses my mind. @kate-flournoy
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@hope Yaya! *dragon dance*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
“Have I not commanded you? Be strong and of good courage; do not be afraid, nor be dismayed, for the Lord your God is with you wherever you go.” Joshua 1:9
“Trust in the Lord with all your heart, and lean not on your own understanding; in all your ways acknowledge Him, and He shall direct your paths.” Proverbs 3:5-6
“But…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 4 months ago
And yes, @Kina-Lamb, this—
I think sometimes when I think “introvert,” I think of people that don’t talk except inside their heads and to themselves, and blush whenever you look at them or talk to them because they’re so nervous. But that isn’t the case usually. Am I right introverts?
is correctly supposed to be erroneous. *grins* Introvert…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 yes ma’am. You do. *thumbs up* Good work.
The human intuition is a marvelous thing. 😉 A lot of the learning associated with writing, in my experience, is just learning the names of things your intuition already understands.
I know EXACTLY what you mean with the utensil metaphor— great way to describe it! lolAs for…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Signing off as well. I wrote 1767.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 4 months ago
How difficult is rewriting? Especially for an 80,000/100,000 word book? What advice do you all have?
Never have I ever even attempted to rewrite anything that long, but here’s my two cents anyway.
Rewriting is exhausting–physically and emotionally. After all, the reason we rewrite is to make our work better, right? It’s…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 4 months ago
How difficult is rewriting? Especially for an 80,000/100,000 word book? What advice do you all have?
Never have I ever even attempted to rewrite anything that long, but here’s my two cents anyway.
Rewriting is exhausting–physically and emotionally. After all, the reason we rewrite is to make our work better, right? It’s…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 4 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper if you’re in this much of a quandary, experiment. I’ve only ever done third person and I love it and I don’t think that’ll change, but if you feel like you need to switch, try it for a chapter or two. See if you like it. If it isn’t quality, you’ll only have spent a little time to solve a quandary that could have sabotaged your…[Read more]
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No. I got 229 though.
Meh. At least it’s better than none.
Hey @Daeus, whenever you need beta-readers for your book, I would love (aka REALLY want) to be one, if you don’t already have enough lined up or anything.
Hey! I would be honored if you would.
😀
I’D be honored.