Christine Eaton

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I have no words @kate-flournoy Thank you.

Thanks @DelightInLife. 😀 It took me forever to get that actually… :/

“You can go back and fix things you already put down, but you can’t fix what isn’t there.”

Awesome advice, Kate! 🙂 @kate-flournoy

@That_Writer_Girl_99

I didn’t write that, and I don’t think I can right now. I’m not that good.

*wise Yoda look* That— is why you fail.

*goes off into gales of smothered laughter* Okay, okay… so it’s not that drastic. I have a reputation to live up to apparently, though, so… *shrugs*

No, you’ve got enough humility to sink a ship.…[Read more]

@Daeus awesome. I got 506 words written. 🙂 See ya.

I’m signing off. @daeus

Yeah. I did.

That’s great, Kate, but it isn’t me. I didn’t write that, and I don’t think I can right now. I’m not that good.

I get the point you’re trying to make, though. @kate-flournoy

Also, see how much I told you by not telling? *grins*

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Ahhh… yes. You’re POV telling. That makes it boring and dull; you’re right. See, what you’re doing is giving us Kara’s thoughts instead of showing us her emotions through the way she acts. Instead of doing this:

That was strange. I think to myself as I—finally—enter my cell. I wonder what Matthias was talking about?
I tak…

[Read more]

Chapter Three:
As I walk briskly down the hall, the lights above me dim. The flickering bulbs cast an eerie, ominous splash of ashy gray on the pale walls. My footsteps are the only sound I hear.
Clip, thump, clip, thump, clip, thump.
“Is he insane?!”
Well. That escalated quickly.
The sudden shout makes my heart leap into my chest, and…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Glad to hear it. 😉

Okay. You need help. Just getting to a good place to start? Prioritizing your ideas? What?

I need help. *glances wearily at the novel excerpt forum so we don’t disturb @daeus*
@kate-flournoy

I need help. *glances wearily at the novel excerpt forum so we don’t disturb @daeus*

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yyyyyes???

Excellent point. @daeus

Ugh. I’m trying to write, but my brain is full of ideas and I can’t quite make sense of them all. Kate, dear, are you on? @kate-flournoy