@christi-eaton
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Now that’s just creepy.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose poor guy… *hugs him* Seriously though, you did great. First person pov is not one of my strong points and can be very easy to do typically, but you did great with it. Thanks for sharing. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter_Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
I wonder, did the powdered sugar incident have inspiration from real life? It seems like it would. 😛 -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal XD XD XD That is amazing. @Aratrea you could put that as a picture with your credentials—Josiah the Wiser, on your video series or books of advice to growing writers. 😀
Btw @Anne-of-Lothlorien, @SleepwalkingMK is an ENFP. Also, if you’re not very extroverted, how do you know you aren’t an INFP? *wiggles eyebrows* Maybe you are. :D…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea Mayhaps I should say I’m sorry…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus about to be. I’ll tag you when I start.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
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Keleigha Liess posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal For some reason, it’s not letting me respond to that thread… :/ Anyway, I’ve been on KP for maybe a year, just not very active until now. The “Stewards of the Pen” thing kind of gave me an incentive to do more, you know, find time! 😉 How about you?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
Snapper, no! You’re supposed to be a nice dragon! *falls to her knees in tears*
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl *maniacal laugh* Mwahahaha!
No…actually, I think that would just be horrible to myself, because I know what’s going to happen. I haven’t even gotten your village yet. Not yet…but soon. After I get past these butterflies. *grrr*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m signing off. Wrote about 400 words and edited a chapter. Bye guys! @jess @anne-of-lothlorien
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
It’s alright @anne-of-lothlorien. I think we’ve all done that at one point or another.
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Elizabeth posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Have you seen any of the new Doctor Who episodes?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Shame, shame… *coughs* Actually, I can relate. @jess
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Keleigha Liess and
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Okay. I went back through chapter two and added a few things, but also switched some of the dialogue around so that Ava says it, not Matthias. That way, the emphasis on how Matthias’ personality changes one he realizes Kara was friends with Tam should be clearer. Hypothetically. This way, Ava’s personality is developed, too.
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@ceaseless-prayer Huh. It did that to me a couple days ago. Weird.
Ah yes, the Stewards of the Pen thing. I wish I had social media just so I could promote this awesome place. 🙂 I’ve been here for about six months. It’s crazy though, because I FEEL like I’ve been here forever, and have known these people my whole life.
Nice, so you’re the…[Read more]
Yeah, me too! I’ve wanted to be more involved before, just busy…
It is fun. It’s nice to have so many KPers with big families, most people think it is weird, or at least odd. Do you enjoy having older siblings? I always wanted some. I kind of adopt my friends’ My best friend is the second youngest of eight, & we’ve been BF since K-5, so I don’t…[Read more]
Older siblings are fun. But you know, my siblings are so close to me in age that it’s not really like having older siblings, if you know what I mean. We’re more like partners in crime. 😉 And hey, adopted siblings are almost as good as the real thing, am I right? I also know a family with eight kids (how coincidental is that? XD), three of which…[Read more]
Yeah, I do, I don’t really feel like my eighteen & sixteen-year old sisters are younger than me. I’m 20, so, your sister’s age? 😉 Yeah, almost. 😉 We have a wonderful church where we are all really close, kind of like a big extended family. Where do you guys go to church? Me neither. I think it’s wonderful!