@christi-eaton
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Wow, that seems like a very well-thought out process, Audrey! Is it your first draft?
I’m…writing. I’ve spent too much time sitting around. I need to write the scene cooking in my head. It’s bothering me. @audrey-caylin
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi Audrey! @audrey-caylin
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
*sigh* Yes…slowly but surely. @winter-rose
Who doesn’t like fried chicken? @dragon-snapper
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *looks at you suspiciously* Do you not like fried chicken?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hello Gabby! How’s things? @winter-rose
Um, whatever you say, @dragon-snapper…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hello Gabby! How’s things?
Um, whatever you say, @dragon-snapper…
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Dragons like to eat fried chicken. Dragons like to eat ice cream. Dragons love to have fried chicken and ice cream in the same day.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
ICE CREAM! *hugs you* *takes ice cream*
*frowns* Okay, wait, that’s not the kind of drumstick I was expecting. Is that chicken? @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
No one bothered to tag me? I’m offended.
Just joking.
I’m here too. @daeus @dragon-snapper @winter-rose
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose Yep. Still taking as much criticism as I can get. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Hello!
@winter-rose I am editing my novel, and might move on to edit my contest story, then I shall brainstorm. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Alia Poor guardian angel. 😛
Yes, I’ll be praying. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a GREAT midpoint. So right now what you’re looking for seems to be a first plot point— where Kara commits to action. What about Blake? Was he taken in the fight with the Catastrophes? Or did he use it as a distraction to infiltrate the prison and get caught or something? If that’s the case Matthias could have gotten…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’ve done that a little bit…the problem is I can’t think of any major plot points–at all. I know that Kara ends up being thrown out of the prison along with Matthias, and I know that should happen somewhere around the halfway point in the book, but…
Ugh. It’s so frustrating. I need specifics but no matter how hard I try I can’t come up with…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 perhaps you should try mapping out Kara’s arc in detail and going from there?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal I know. My impeccable memory and attention to detail must have failed me then. *hangs head in shame*
I was so happy to be proven incorrect though. XD
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