Christine Eaton

@winter-rose *highfives back*

I’m here too! @daeus @winter-rose

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Aw, really? I’m glad to hear that. 😀 My pleasure.

@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉

Pause. I have to do the dishes, cause I’m home now, and then if we’re on can we move this to the actual google doc in itself? @kate-flournoy

@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛

Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together?

Also… @emma-flournoy Thank you so much for going through Prison the way you are. It’s really helping me!

You’re my brainstorming buddy. You’re always helping. @kate-flournoy

I feel like the logical move is to decide…the logical move for my characters. Kara and Blake head back to their cells, but now Kara knows that Blake has a lot of secrets. Matthias, the instigator, is in solitary and is rather incapable of doing anything at the moment…so…[Read more]

*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

*sigh* Yes. Emotions. Fickle things, hard for me to write. I’ll get better at it eventually.

I don’t have any ideas for chapter 7. None. My brain is empty except for one thing that doesn’t even relate to the seventh chapter and I don’t know if I’ll even use it yet. @kate-flournoy

Oooooh, I like it!

There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]

@that_writer_Girl_99 Have fun! And yes, I am impressed anyway. I can hardly sing, though I’m trying to learn.
@winter-rose *raises hands* I plead not guilty!
I’d love to stay longer, but I’ve to eat and get ready for guitar lessons.

@kate-flournoy Okay. I won’t be able to chat on there right now because I’m doing it off my phone…

@winter-rose Whoa, cool! I’m so excited. I get to go to an airport and fly on a plane and honestly that would be nice in itself it I get to go to Canada too! *giggles uncontrollably*

@dragon-snapper Well, I’m singing a few songs in French, a few in English, and one or two in Latin. Don’t be that impressed. I’ve no idea what most of them–except…[Read more]

Whoa, cool! I’m so excited. I get to go to an airport and fly on a plane and honestly that would be nice in itself it I get to go to Canada too! *giggles uncontrollably*

@dragon-smaller Well, I’m singing a few songs in French, a few in English, and one or two in Latin. Don’t be that impressed. I’ve no idea what most of them–except for the ones…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 don’t think so. Heading over there now.

Yes. Once again I’ve no idea what to do… have you read chapter 6? @kate-flournoy

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *appears in a poof of elvish stardust**adjusts Jedi robes* You wanted to talk about chapter seven?

@that_writer_girl_99 Nice! Do you know what you’re singing?
@winter-rose Sorry. This time it was an accident though. I sneezed.