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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper *raises right hand solemnly* I shall never offend a dragon again.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yeeeah, I was worried about that. Thanks for the feedback!
@kate-flournoy Awwwwww…thanks!
@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks, friend. 🙂 -
Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I’m back…but if anyone comes along claiming I must return to the gold from whence I came, I don’t know what I’ll do. Especially is someone says:

that.
@salome01w4g *lights your sword* Go forth and conquer! -
Snapper replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.
*sigh*
My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
*gasps* *runs to tackle-hug the dozen or so Webkinz in her closet*
Anyway. Enough of my antics. @ingridrd The story does, as @kate-flournoy mentioned, give off a sort of Toy Story vibe, but there’s a sort of open-ended thrill to it that almost begs for more. And I love, love the way you wrote “Pubby”. The childlike, wondering sort of style with…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
*blinks* Oh, well, I wasn’t expecting it to be so sad… *blinks again to hide the fact that she’s crying* Okay. I’ll need to read this over again before I can give anything constructive, but otherwise, good story! It’s really well written, and the plot seems smooth and easy to follow.
I’ll come back if I think of anything else.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Maybe I should tag some people…what an idea?!? *slaps face*
@emily @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone -
Ingrid started the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
FEEDBACK WANTED
Hey, guys!
I wrote this very short story a while back and just looked at it again. Could you give me some constructive criticism? Pretty please?? Thanks!The day I arrive, Mother stuffs me in the dark closet to wait. She places me inside a cardboard box, filled with the other toys. There is a necklace, a set of paints, two…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Come back! I didn’t mean it!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus I know, right?
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Even the king is against me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd *cough* Dragons are our friends.
*flies off so as not to be beaten* -
Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

No offense to @dragon-snapper. -
Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily-d The story of my life…lol
@dragon-snapper WHAAAAA…! So cool! -
Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 10 months ago
@catwing Glad to be of service! All of those songs are great, btw.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
There. I made one!
The picture came from Pexels…the quote came from me. -
Joy replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper HAHAHA What a pure coincidence I just finished watching that movie just now!!
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily I have watched the Princess Bride! It’s been a while!
@aratrea Hehe, doesn’t he!
@lifeofkatie Hi! Great to meet you! *Energetically shakes your hand, blushing like some sort of manga-girl maniac*
@emma-flournoy Yup, especially in Texas. It’s practically celebrated as a holiday
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Joy replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@daughteroftheking There’s Viking in my blood! (Really! I’m descended from Vikings! :-D) I will! *marches out into a world of new ides*
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