@christi-eaton
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@catwing I don’t know much about writing synopses, but what you have sounds super interesting! I can’t wait to read the story and find out how Alex and her friends save the kingdom. 🙂
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Cloudy posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon
3. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d67vS_RJeEsFT6LhqNpfXKuDw1pszZdryiCx1PDBTro/edit?usp=sharing
#3 Is stuuupid. Tell me honestly if you think I should scrap it. But thanks again. You tend to raise questions that flesh out the story. And remember, I’m available almost literally always to read stuff so if you want me to read something…[Read more] -
Cloudy posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon 2. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U8rKjBaaN_9DvjJp4qQ5f7GduXCDppOri4ZwomtNhd4/edit?
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Cloudy posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon Yay! How’s the prep for the performance/how did the performance go? Thanks again! Yep, we are about three away from finishing. 🙂
1. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DfGQCtCXVXVlhYnxgnIz8oZcsekhBOS2nr4vB60-rhg/edit?usp=sharing -
Cloudy replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess I honestly don’t know what I’m doing. In my own writing. I don’t know how I would help you except for this one question: Is it BMA your OYAN or Crown of Ice. Because I agree with @kate-flournoy make the world seem better than she left it (if it’s BMA). Sure she doesn’t get what she wants but her actions have been very…unseemly to the HS.…[Read more]
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Cloudy replied to the topic Inktober in the forum Art 8 years, 10 months ago
@daughteroftheking DID YOU PERSEVERE!I have attempted to do so. How ’bout you @christi-eaton
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Ingrid replied to the topic Critique this? in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel This is a great poem. I love the tree’s voice.
There are definitely some parts that are awkward. I echo what @daughteroftheking said about the lineHow I long for a pool of water to the rim
And I also agree with @jane-maree about the dark mood. I felt like the tree was dying and in agony almost the whole time. Maybe turn his…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@emerald-flyer Awww…thanks for the feedback!
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Joy replied to the topic Critique this? in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Anyone?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily Thanks for your comment! I know, it honestly makes me feel guilty too…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@kballen Haha love it!
Here’s mine:
“The journey of life isn’t about trying
to weather the storm, it’s about learning
to dance in the rain.” -
Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I saw this one at a hotel once and had to laugh…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@kballen Oh, that’s a good one!
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I am so glad I’ve been able to help you find direction and purpose! 🙂 I find that editing people makes me look at MY OWN work with a more critical eye, and helping people remember not to use adverbs so often commas, etc is super helpful for ingraining it in your brain. So YAY!
I would be delighted to read it anytime. I like to say I am a decent…[Read more]
I didn’t get an email or a link. My email is wysteriacampion913@gmail.com 😀