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Charityanne posted a new activity comment 1 year, 5 months ago
@felicity
I’m so glad that you’ve found a safe place for your creativity to be shown and grown.
God has placed you exactly where He wants you for the exact amount of time He wants you there.
I know we haven’t interacted much but you have inspired me in some of your writing and your comments.
Thanks for being friendly, it means a lot.😊
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Charityanne replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Monday works better for me but if Friday is better for everyone else I might be able to do that.
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Charityanne replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
#1 works best for me if not that then #3
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Charityanne replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@esther
yes that makes sense.
I will probably watch a little before making much of a move myself.☺️
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Charityanne replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I’m not sure if I have the time either but I thought I would tag a friend 😉
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Charityanne replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
@esther
sounds fun!
I’m not sure how it works maybe you could explain it again? 🙃 -
Charityanne replied to the topic Trapped in Library of the Kingdom of Pen — Author RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Charityanne replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
@orielle2023
Yes! I like woodpeckers (even though they can be very destructive) they are very pretty!
[I wrote this poem (in bed) at a family friends house and they had a lot of woodpeckers.]
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Charityanne replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
very nice!
there where a few places that didn’t quite rhyme quite right but overall I LOVE it!
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Thank you!
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Charityanne replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes the poem is called A Kitten.😊
If you’re referring to where to pause in each paragraph that would be where the commas are.
hope that’s what you were looking for.
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Charityanne started the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
I stretch and yawn and run about I’m small and cute to see, I love to leave my small footprints wherever you have cleaned.
I sit and cuddle in your lap when I think it’s convenient, I know that I must be the best ‘cause to me you’re very lenient.
And when you are angry with me, I’m bashful on the spot, no one could ever keep a grudge against s…[Read more]
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Charityanne replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Beautifully done! Amazing! Inspiring! Dazzling! Marvelous!
very good very good👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Applause everyone applause!
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Charityanne started the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
A rustling wind, a shuddering chill, a woodpeckers knock on your windowsill…
The golden brown fields in the sun and the rain, like deer running past is the weather today…
A clear autumn sky full of dazzling stars, with seasons like this aren’t we glad that they’re ours.
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Charityanne started the topic The story of a Posy in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
I am a little posey, I look into the sky, I love the bright and cheery days when birds go flying by,
the rainy days are lovely too wear underneath my shade, the little bugs come scudding where they need not be afraid.
My closest friends come to maintain the ground in which I live, I haven’t much to bless them with, but the fragrance that I give.
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Charityanne replied to the topic Daydream in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks!
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