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@inkling-for-christ whoops, somehow missed this! 😛 Cool.

I’m laughing too much. In case you’ve forgotten, I do need to breathe, guys.

@mariposa Well, this kind of made my day. I should start calling @aratrea The DeGraafinator 😉

@mariposa Oh my word I’m giggling so hard. XD This is THE BESTISTEST. xP

@mariposa This is fantastic. 😀

Tagging @the-real-kapeefer for good measure.

@Mariposa I think I’m dying. XD XD XD

@Mariposa good heavens, I think I’m dying. XD XD XD

@sleepwalkingmk Nice! I’ve put in a couple of comments on the actual doc for you. 🙂

I didn’t mind that section, but I definitely know some people who would be bothered. As long as you have a connection, cause yeah, like Kate said, it kinda did feel drop you random in the middle of gore and evil for no reason, out of context like that.

About the swear words things. Obviously, top swear words are out. Then you get into the picky…[Read more]

@aratrea Clearly I need to get on the forum more, but putting someone’s username underneath their actual name to save all that extra clicking was a stroke of genius.

@amy-l-klob *sweeps hat off and bows with a flourish* Always an honor to be of service to writers of the Kingdom 😉

@Xonos-darkgrate what @Daeus and the rest already said, basically, on the general subject.

I did, however, find your excerpt slightly disturbing, which is odd, because I’m not usually disturbed by that kind of stuff. It may have been because it lacked subtlety and I kind of just felt like I had my face shoved in a pool of blood for no reason and…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate

Hey!
So I haven’t read the thing, because I’m a bit of a ‘link-a-phobe’ (not you, just the internet), but my main thoughts are dark themes and darkness in literature in general is that if you’re not comfortable showing it to someone close to you, like your mom or dad or brother or sister or best friend, then it may have gone to…[Read more]

Petition to name this The 12 Days of Geek-mas.

@amy-l-klob I’d recommend starting by introducing your protagonist, but I would be careful about having a slow lead-in to the actual story. You want to grab the audience’s attention in the first page. That doesn’t mean you need to immediately leap into the main plot of your novel, but you should be including some conflict and/or intrigue that…[Read more]

@dekreel Is that your quote? Because it’s from the same movie. 😛 XD

@catwing “We survived but we’re dead!!” XD

Lots of works have more than one villain. For the BBC series of Robin Hood, they had the Sheriff of Notingham, and Guy of Gisborne. Guy mostly worked for the Sheriff, but he also had his own personal axe to grind with Robin Hood, which didn’t just make him the main villain’s lackey.

Lord of the Rings has both Sauron and Sauraman Again, Sauraman…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ Thanks! This will make it much easier to give you specific and understandable feedback. 🙂