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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Chapter 14
A Mahnith’s Call
Sef lay awake, tossing and turning.
She was worried about her mahnith.
Any day now, Neveah could start labor, and in a matter of weeks, the Pythonos would be back.
How could they lose the baby?
They couldn’t.
Sef refused to give the baby up, especially to the Pythonos. She knew what the Pythonos would do to t…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
That’s good…
I just feel bad because I’m 14 and idk what’s wrong with me…like why am I thinking of all these dark things?!?
I know I always come across as more mature, most people think I’m at least 16…and I don’t mentally feel 14.
But still…no matter how I feel my age doesn’t change…
I’m having a mental crisis *sobbing*
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Okay great! If you go to my profile, I posted the link in my status update. Thank you so much!
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Thank youuuuu I’m so happy now!!!
hahaha yesssss as you should jk jk
WHAT THE HECK YOU HAVE 201 PINS FOR RIKER?!?! I DON’T EVEN HAVE THAT MANY FOR SEF OR LILITU
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Of course girl!!! I’m literally sooo proud of you and so lucky to know you (even if it’s just on KP, girl you’re amazing!!!)
And I love you’re aesthetics, very aesthetic-y <3Â XD XD
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
YESSS girl Pinterest and Canva are the BEST!
Hey, do you want to follow me on pinterest? You can’t search up my account cuz it’s private, but here’s the link to follow me if you want!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Would you mind looking at my novel? You don’t have to if your busy, but the more people critiquing it, the more it motivates me to write!!
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
I read up until Chapter the Fifth!!!
You are an amazing writer, it’s really good, I feel like I’m reading a published book!!!!
I’ll read Chapter the Sixth as soon as I can get to it.
No, I don’t think Alan seems inconsistent from what I’ve read so far!
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 1 week ago
I try to overlook mistakes and I’ve gotten a lot better, believe it or not! But I still can’t stand looking at my draft and seeing so much cringy writing!
Even when I build something out of wood…I still want the wood to look perfect lolI’m just a perfectionist I guess *shrugs*
Great!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 4 months, 1 week ago
This is really good! I still don’t understand how you can write so fast…
Like I get that you have it all planned out…I have mine planned out too, exactly what I want to happen, but I still can’t write it that fast, I’m too much of a perfectionist and want everything to be exactly how I want XD
The only critique was that…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I’m sorry, I’ve just been super lazy with my RP’ing lately XD XD
here you go! <3
Sef
“She’s pretty,” Sef smiled. “How can you get her picture in your eyes?” she asked, feeling dumb for asking, but the curiosity wouldn’t recede.
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Thanks girl <3
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Thanks!
I’m just trying to be super careful that I’m still honoring God with my writing. And I’m also paranoid about my writing XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Haha you’re good!
But question–Â do you think it’s too dark?
Huh I don’t know if you tagged me or not, I’ll look at it sometime today!!! 👍👍
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
And you can rip apart my writing too XD XD
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