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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
I’m gonna wait for Keilah to rp, since Idk what to do with Gabriel at the moment, so this is kinda a good time.
Oh wow! Are these beta readers for Baron Chronicles? I didn’t know you were that far along in the editing process.
Yes. I have two confirmed beta readers at the moment, plus a friend who I’m going to ask, and someone who I…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Oh wow! Are these beta readers for Baron Chronicles? I didn’t know you were that far along in the editing process.
Lucille
The foliage was so thick that they sat in relative comfort underneath it. It was like standing under the awning of a shop. The wood creaked up and down, like a oak and glass door, opening and shutting under…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Sorry, I was literally preparing an NDA yesterday (for my beta readers) and then went off to do some other stuff.
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel eventually stopped by a short tree. that grew up part of the labyrinth wall. Despite the narrow trunk, which looked like strands of wood twisted together like a candy, the tree had thick…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Lucille
None of that sounded like a definite answer, so Lucy shrugged. She was just as interested in becoming a secretary, anyway.
A clap of thunder rumbled in the distance. Bugs chirped louder as if getting their last voices in before something louder arrived. Gabriel and Lucy sped up, jogging over leaf piles and patches of heather.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
XD
Gabriel Mai
“That depends. Right now? No. You don’t have the strength nor the experience. In the future possibly, though I will say, there is yet to be a woman monster hunter where I am from. But if a woman had the will, and the strength to back it up, I guess it could be okay, though women should be protected like children…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Because she’s a diva? 🤣
Lucille
For a while, neither of them had anything to say. Lucy slipped the leather cover onto the hatchet, and they moved on, the tree’s fallen leaves trailing behind them. While they had spent time there, a darker mass of clouds had approached on the horizon and the wind howled somewhere above their heads.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
He’d hate her attitude XD, but yes
Gabriel Mai
When the screaming quieted, Gabriel answered. “Pretty much, though I don’t know what a Chee-wa-wa is. Ditching them? I can’t. At the moment, the village I live in has had an increased number of attacks despite the population not growing by a large amount, and a few new varieties of…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Broooo I just realized you and Rumi from K-Pop Demon Hunters would get along
Lucille
“You save their butts from dying and they hate you because of irregularly distributed pigmentation? These people sound stupid. Chihuahua brains. You should ditch them.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel shook his head. “It isn’t proper for a Protector to share his secret with many people. Besides, if they discovered my birthmarks, the fact I’m the Protector wouldn’t save me. I’ve already been marked as a demon by my previous village, and they’ve all seen the Protector fight at some point or another.” The red…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Sorry that I haven’t been replying as soon as usual. A raffle I was hosting on Unvale ended and I’m trying to organize and get the winners their prizes.
Gabriel Mai
“Because it’s a secret, and we aren’t that close. To be honest, the only people I know from that village who I trust not to gossip about it is Master, Isabella and her…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
I figured something like that lol
Lucille
“Huh. Okay.” She threw the hatchet again and succeeded. “Why don’t you tell your – uh – friends what you’re really doing?”
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Gabriel Mai
“No. I don’t have anyone like that. Isabella is simply the one who gives me cinnamon buns while making some sort of banter comment.” Gabriel shook his head.
I will say Isabella most definitely has a crush on him, though he’s oblivious because he has no idea what that looks like XD.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Lucille
Lucy pulled the hatchet out of the tree. Her cheeks glowed red from the effort and her arms felt good from the exercise. She cradled the head in one hand and the handle in the other, striding back to Gabriel.
She didn’t smile very much, not doing so on the best of days, but gave him all of her eyes’ attention. “Is Isabella your sweetheart?”
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel clapped, genuinely smiling under his mask. “Just like that! No, only the Fourth knows I can throw hatchets. To my acquaintances, they would say I’d be the first one to die if a monster attacked because I have no self-preservation and they think I have no training,” Gabriel chuckled, amused by their opinions. “No,…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Lucille
“Bet they wanted you because you’d win.”
She stepped forward, gray eyes focused sharply on the tree, and the hatchet sunk into the bark.
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel smiled softly. “Take a step closer to the tree before you throw again, it should properly rotate and lodge in the tree that way,” He took the hatchet and lodged it perfectly in the tree. He retrieved it for Lucy before speaking again. “I’ve seen such games at festivals. I never participated, though I have been…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
Lucille
It soon became obvious that Lucy had less trouble using her own strength than quelling it. Every time she threw the hatchet, she overshot and sent it zinging back over the stoned ground.
But aiming seemed like a more important thing to get right, and after a couple tries, she remembered to pause and focus on the tree. She hit the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months ago
I’ve never done it lol. I looked up a YouTube tutorial.
Gabriel Mai
Gabriel patted her shoulder lightly as if to say it was alright, though his own ears didn’t appreciate the sound.
“Nice try.” Gabriel picked up the hatchet, and gave it back to her. “Throw it straight. Take your time if you have to, and don’t put so much force in.…[Read more]
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