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@keilah-h

I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?

So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD

Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!

Thank you so muchhhhh

@ellette-giselle

Woah woah woah *Stumbles back* Thank you!! 😆<3 I’ll post more very soon! In the art chat of course; I don’t want to spam this topic.

@keilah-h @loopylin

Appreciate you! (This is me, looking for new ways to say thank you.)

Is Barnes wearing her mask? I can’t remember what it looks like.

Yep. This is a shorthand version of her though. I’ll post more stuff when I get to it.

@keilah-h

He’s just admiring his birdie, no thoughts of world domination or unethical experiments today 😊 lol

*Snorts* That’s pretty funny, I like it

*Subscribes* I’m not very professional, but I like hobby art and this will be an interesting topic. 😁

@savannah_grace2009

Yaayyy I’m glad that’s what you needed!! Awesome! <3 I was so worried for a second that it wasn’t.

you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Aw, don’t cry, I like critiquing and I thought it was a fun way to spend my time. :]

I’ll think about the things you mentioned and are struggling with, and if there’s something you need to brainstorm…[Read more]

I soooo need to custom my brushes, because either the pencil has inconsistent pressure or it’s just me. But that’s a ramble for the art chat.

Doodles my character and her mum because I felt like it, lol

@loopylin

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHH GIRL I LOVE FANTASY <333333 it’s my favoriteeee I’m so excited!

@the_lost-journal

I skimmed through this, and your WIP’s sound SO COOL!

I love them!

@grcr

Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…

Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Aw girlie thank you so much… <33

Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.

AWWWWW

Why Eloy thoughhhh he kinda just drops off the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Omc thank you so much girl, that means a lot…you’re gonna make me cryyyy

Ahhh thank youuuu 😭😭💜💜💜💜💜

Your critique was EXACTLY what I was looking for, so thank you!!!

–Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

YAYYYY!!! That’s one of the things I was worried about, and I’m s…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

I know, it’s still just a little bit creepy.

@the_lost-journal

Ah, ok, that’s cool!

Also, your signature is CREEPY.

@the_lost-journal

Cool, all your WIPs sound neat! So are TKOK and P.I.C.A.F.E. set on this earth?  How does that work with the fantasy elements?

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, well, I am reading! *Shoves all the motivation your way* I will give you some comments and some in-depth thoughts! Hopefully these are what you’re looking for.

Comments (as I’m going through) –

– Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

– Prose flows smoothly…[Read more]

@keilah-h

It’s in the update on her profile. 🙃

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!