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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Sounds like a plan 😈
Ok don’t know how much of this you know so I’m just going to say it, even though you haven’t done anything wrong: We keep everything here PG, so no one dies (though sometimes they get “sent to the hospital”, a vague reference to severe injuries), and we don’t really do blood. But other than that, pretty much…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@whaley here’s your RP
to remind everyone else, I do Kate in the first-person even though I’m a guy… I don’t know why my brain forces me to but it does
Katonia
“How’s your semester been so far?” Hugo asked.
“Semester?” Brian asked. “Well, we had what, one class?”
“One and a half,” I corrected. “No homework, though.”
“I did mine,” Brian…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
wrong tag womp womp
fists flying? careful what you wish for, some of my guys got tranquilizers…
@koshka @keilah-h @whalekeeper @anyonewhocares
For the benefit of those unfamiliar with my bullies, I’ll give a brief rundown:
They call themselves The Society. It’s sort of an alliance of kids who want to be…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed-and-redeemed
You’re back! Wohoo!
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
“They have an active conflict going, i don’t know about a full out war or anything but the military of this nation is definitely doing something.”
WAIT WAHT NO ONE TOLD ME WAAHETAT
*begins daydreaming* war… street fighting… military involvement… destruction… ATOM BOMBS
*remembers* oh right I don’t own this world I can’t r…[Read more] -
calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper I must say the new profile pic is amazing
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper are you planning on RPing? If not that’s fine I’d just like to know
Johnny
“Dos,” El Burro said, but he trailed off. He twisted back to look at Johnny. “Why are we here?”
“The dragon girl wanted us to keep this girl here,” Johnny said.
El Burro grunted. “And what loyalty must we have to her? This affair bores me.”
“I want…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
Johnny
The rapid shift from dragon back to girl did more to further drive Johnny’s nerves into oblivion than it did sooth them. El Burro, never hesitating for a second, dragged him and the other boy behind him into the soda shop. “Wait!” Johnny started to protest, “what are we actually-”
The first impression Johnny had of the soda shop…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Johnny
Johnny wondered at the dragon’s words. Destroy cities? Kill people? He shouted over the whipping wind. “Uh, we weren’t really planning on… whole cities! We sort of… just want to become top dogs at school! Assert dominance!” He realized he was talking to a female and explained. “It’s sort of a male thing!”
El Burro pointed. “The eagle…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Johnny
“If one of you boys wants to come flying, I’d get aboard now!” The dragon barked.
Slick’s face went as white as his hair was black. He, and several of the posse, dove into the bushes with a cry of fear. Vinny backed away. “I didn’t sign up for this! Witchcraft! I’m dreaming! Call me when it’s over!” He turned and barreled through…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
The second to last thing you wrote, just one tiny thing, maybe not quite so much crying. When I’m sad, I just stare off into the distance. Other than that, he’s definitely masculine, especially in the parts preceding the roof parts.
And I was about to say, like a stereotypical guy trying to fix all the problems, “Why doesn’t he…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
RAE: “This might sound really weird, but I have no idea how to write girls. Sure, I can write emotions and stuff, but they usually become copies of each other personality wise, and even weirder, they aren’t copies of me. Estelle, Nae, Narsa and Ilsa are basically the only girls I’ve written who feel unique. Help?”
Allow me to demonstrate my imm…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Ok I read the scene. And the first thing I think is “I’ve never been in a war – I can’t imagine what that’s like.”
I will tell you it feels like it’s a real guy, and it feels like real war, and I think what you had him do so far is what a guy would do. Now we come to what comes next, and to me, the first question is, How strong…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
So I changed my mind and am going to reply in the WIP forum, but it really depends on what sort of guy he is
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calyhuge replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Reply coming in the Characters of the Opposite Gender forum
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Ok here we go Sorry school has been busy getting back to it
Should I tag Sara?
Johnny
There was enough broad-leafed foliage, and the two victims were talking earnestly enough that they couldn’t see or hear the approaching Society. It also helped that everyone stayed completely silent.
Slick held up three fingers, then two, then one.
The…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Help with a scene in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I actually recently wrote a short scene somewhat like this, where a character’s arm got shot by a poison arrow and he had to have an amputation. Basically I did it from the amputee’s part until he blacked out and then from his bystanding friend’s standpoint. I definitely think you should go with @ellette-giselle ‘s idea, but to build on it…[Read more]
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calyhuge replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months ago
@rae thanks!
Ok, we’re good to go. Tomorrow I’ll probably pull the lever and get this destructification operation underway
Standby for liftoff…
(I’m really excited to fight other people’s charries in case you didn’t notice🤪)
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calyhuge posted a new activity comment 4 months ago
I am sure it will be the former 🙂
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