@cahndida-serkhaman
Active 10 years ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@perfectfifths; @daeus; @winter-rose (And anyone else)
Thank you for praying. Just after I posted my request, I ended up chucking up. 🙁 It might have been because I was trying to take some medicine which wasn’t the nicest. After that was over, I sat outside and just rested. None of you Americans will probably understand this, but watching gum…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone -
Ingrid posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
“Faith is not part of the Christian life, it’s the whole thing.”
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Greta replied to the topic Book Spine Poetry in the forum Poetry 9 years, 4 months ago
@spradlin
Oh, that would be so neat! I would totally enter a Book Spine Poetry Contest thingy. 😛 😉 -
Ingrid replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus
Whoops! I was thinking of it as Matthew taking on the character Edwin Brook like Matthew fighting him or something. 🙂 LOL Now that you rewrote it, it does make sense. Nice work. I like the new and improved version. 😉 🙂 😉 -
Ingrid replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus
I like the changes you made regarding the sentence structure that @kate-flournoy mentioned. Nice job. One other thing I noticed.Returning to wreak his vengeance, Matthew takes on the character of the mysterious Edwin Brook. His wealth and power make his success almost certain, but strange events keep thwarting his every move.
I think…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Awesome Christian Writer's Conference that you have to attend in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
This sounds awesome, Kate! Thanks for sharing!
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Faith Kindred's profile was updated 9 years, 4 months ago
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, I like it! Although, I’m really not the best judge when it comes to stuff like this…Haha! But it definitely kept my interest throughout.
I don’t have anything to add, really. I agree with what @kate-flournoy said about the sentence structure. I did notice that, but, overall, I think you did a great job -much better than I could’ve done.…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@perfectfifths & @hannah-c Here you go. Just a little something that I was working on. 🙂
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
Okay peoples I’m STUCK!!!! I need a title for a story, but I don’t want to give too much away. So basically it’s based on Jane Austen’s novels and Charles is lord of Birchwood, a magnificent estate. His *cough* comes and well, kicks him out, so to speak.
My sister suggested the title “The Annoying Guest” which would work as a chapter title, but…[Read more]-
You could just call it “Lord of Birchwood.” I don’t know. Just a suggestion. Or you could call it *Cough*, since that seems to be a theme in your story. 😉
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@bluejay Uh oh… even the KP doctor has a cough. D’you think it’s from all that smoke from my melting the chairs yesterday? 😛
Lords of the Will
Birchwood Problems
The Lord of Birchwood
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*hands you cough medicine* Sorry, that’s all I could come up with for now.-
@dragon-snapper Yes, that smoke was terrible. So please don’t do that again. Ooo cough medicine, thank you. You know, if you were nice tempered, I could take you on as a nurse. 😉
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@his-instrument Hehe. The genre…hard question since I’m not great with genres, but just think Pride and Prejudice. 🙂
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How about “The Will of Birchwood”?
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Or does that sound too much like a name???? :S
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The title “The Birchwood Will” might work, if you think that “The Will of Birchwood” doesn’t work. 🙂
Jackson E. Graham
http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham
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Hmm…a second on Lord of Birchwood.
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hmm, I’m not sure, but here are some questions that might help you choose.
What lesson does the character learn?
What’s one word that could sum up the story’s conflict?
Is there anything extremely unusual about your characters or the situations they find themselves in?
What are common words used in titles for the book’s genre? (romance, I assume.…[Read more]
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea I hope you’ve seen Flywheel. Q: What kind of character is Vince? A henchman? Bad guy? Neutral? I can’t figure him out.
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Unfortunately, Flywheel is still sitting on my to-watch list… >.> =P
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@aratrea *gasp* Dooooommmmm…..
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I know. xP I really need to get around to watching it one of these days…
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You do. And when you’ve watched it, please tell me what Vince is. My sisters and I were talking about it last night and I can’t decide. 🙁 (And it’s driving me crazy)
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Haha; I will!
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Greta replied to the topic Book Spine Poetry in the forum Poetry 9 years, 4 months ago
@bluejay
Ohhh, those are really cool! I love the first one especially. 🙂 By the way, I love your new profile picture. Maybe it’s not so new, but I haven’t been on here in a while; I’m just so busy with school. I miss talking to all you KeePers, though. 😉 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@hannah-c I laughed when I read that and I’m still chuckling. I like that.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Free Verse Poems in the forum Poetry 9 years, 4 months ago
Okay. Awesome, many thumbs up and all that stuff. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
*nods* Very wise advice. @hannah-c
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BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
ah well you should try it some time.
@hannah-c Hmmm… *raises eyebrow*
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BlueJay replied to the topic Free Verse Poems in the forum Poetry 9 years, 4 months ago
Yes, I believe that does make sense. Let me post this for you to critique @spradlin.
I wrote a simple word.
That’s all that started it.
I didn’t realize it then
But I would write a book.I wrote a simple sentence.
A description of a hero.
I added more details
And a new person was born.I wrote a paragraph.
A new scene was painted.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
YIKES!! RSPCA had better no get on here. 😉
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That’s a good one. 🙂