@cahndida-serkhaman
Active 9 years, 12 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Ingrid replied to the topic Tag Fail in the forum Questions and Support 9 years ago
@winter-rose
No, I am not helpful in any way, shape, or form. I’ve actually been having this problem too. Someone smarter than me will need to rescue us. 😉 Anyone? -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic Ah, Just One More Thing in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise, unfortunately, I will not be going. 🙁 I would’ve loved to though! I don’t live too far away from there, and it would be awesome to meet you guys! I’m going to be super busy next week though… I hope you all have a great time! 🙂
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@daeus that’s awesome! Congratulations!!!
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BlueJay and
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Ingrid replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years ago
@anyone
I’ll do some reviews!
I don’t think anyone has reviewed the movie Minions yet. All I have to say about it is…it shouldn’t even be a movie. The beginning was okay, but then you wonder where the original plot went and the main characters are far more annoying than they are amusing. My advice: don’t waste your time watching it. The Despicabl…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper
*puppy eyes* Pleeeeeeeeeeeaasssseeeee??????????? I’m dying to read more! 🙂 -
Ingrid replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper
Well…
So…
Um..
WOW.
There are not words for how much I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!! Simply put, this is ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. Period.
As for my favorite line, I love all of the ones mentioned, but the last line…“I like your dragons.”
…was one of the best. Perfect ending to an amazing story. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Mr. Nice guy in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@r-j-wordsmith
*wild applause* This is hilarious. Seriously. I was grinning the entire time. 🙂
I literally noticed one thing:“Sir, if you have anything against my height I advise it to keep it to yourself
This should say “I advise you” not “it”. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@overcomer
I like this a lot! It has a very fairytale-ish feel (sorry for stealing your words, @ethryndal), which is what I’m sure you were going for. So nice job!
1. Try not to use parentheses as much as you do. Example:She plopped (rather ungraciously) back down on the divan and patted the spot next to her.
2. It might just be me but using the…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Ladies and Gentlemen! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
So upset that I wasn’t able to make it to the discussion. 🙁 Hopefully I can next time! Thanks for the link though, @Daeus…
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer @everyone else.
Hi Keepers,
I thought I’d better touch base and let you all know that I’m still around but just not able to spend time on Kingdom pen. I’m ashamed to admit that I breached my parents’ trust and that’s going to take some time and effort to…[Read more]-
And @rolena-hatfield too
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@bluejay I was just thinking about you tonight, and wondering if you had gotten injured or sick. I’m so glad you are okay! 🙂 I’m sorry things aren’t going well. I will be praying for you, and for your family! We really miss you. :'( 🙂
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Hey, @bluejay! Glad to see you again, though I’m sorry to hear what’s been going on! I was wondering where you went, especially since I made comments on that story you sent. If you’re still up for all that and want to get in contact with me, I have changed my email, so I’ll have to send it again 🙂
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@bluejay, I’m so sorry this has happened for you. I have to say that I can fully empathize and understand where you’re coming from.Please know that I will not judge you, as I have also broken my parents trust on multiple occasions in the past. That was one of the reasons I started spending less time here. As you said, sometimes these things bring…[Read more]
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@Bluejay!!! I’ve been thinking of you quite often and wondering what was up; and been praying for you, ’cause I’d no idea why I hadn’t heard from you in so long. I’ll certainly keep praying for you and your family, and I really hope all goes well.
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@Kate-Flournoy Just making sure you saw this.
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@bluejay ah, I wondered where you went. I’ll be praying, for sure. And yes, believe me— in the long run, this will strengthen your family. 🙂
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@bluejay Miss you bunches and bunches, girl, but I’m glad you gave us this update and were so honest! That take a lot of courage. Praying for y’all and proud of you for making a hard (but ultimately, I’m sure, good) decision!
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I miss you a lot already, @bluejay . 🙁 Don’t stay away too long! I’ll pray that you and your family will be able to work things out.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Punctuation Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus
I believe you have it written correctly. This has always been a point of confusion for me too, but I’m fairly certain that the dialogue should be capitalized and surrounded with quotations. 🙂 -
Ingrid replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose
Nothing to critique. Brilliantly written and engaging! The ending is very satisfying. Nice work! 🙂 -
Ingrid replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@winter-rose
WOW. I noticed a few things about this.
1. The protagonist’s voice is hilarious. Don’t change a thing about Sam’s personality.
2. I think the first scene is really good, but I’m not sure it’s necessary for the story. Everything after Sam starts telling about his day is amazing, just maybe think about putting the scene with his mom in…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith
What are you trying to do? Make me cry my eyes out??? *blows nose and wipes away tears*
This is so simple but beautifully written. I did notice some spelling and punctation errors, but other than that, it’s really good. I see now from your post above what the “Condemned” sign means, but maybe you could make that a little clearer.…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith
*examining you closely through spectacles* Hmm…homeschooled. C.S. Lewis fan. Has a ton of siblings. *shrugs* I suppose we could put up with you. *gives you worlds biggest hug*
Hi!
I have learned so much from KP and I hope you have as much fun here as I have! Welcome! 🙂 😉 🙂 -
Ingrid posted an update 9 years, 2 months ago
If you feel like you’re drowning in life’s problems, don’t worry. Your life guard walks on water.
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Oh that’s great. 🙂 I could stand to better remember it.
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Such a great reminder!!!
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Ingrid changed their profile picture 9 years, 2 months ago
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