@cahndida-serkhaman
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Cahndida Serkhaman posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
I love writing poetry <3
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Cahndida Serkhaman replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
I would change some things…
The first verse… not sure what to suggest, but it sounds a little off from the rest of the poem. “And made Him so mad” is a huge understatement, which might work fine for this poem, but this line could be a lot stronger.
“Some seven of, some two” would sound better written as “Some of seven, some of two.”
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Cahndida Serkhaman replied to the topic Hi all you fellow writers 😉 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
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So how should I use this forum? Do you all use it to ask for critiques or ideas or what? 🙂 -
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Cahndida Serkhaman started the topic Hi all you fellow writers 😉 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi everyone! 😀 I’m glad to be on here! My username, Cahndida Serkhaman, is the name of a character I made up. On the OYAN forum my username is Stardust. (Don’t know how many people on here are OYANers but whatever…) Lets see if I can remember to call myself by the right username… 😛
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Cahndida Serkhaman replied to the topic Hi howdy hey. in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
Greetings 😀
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Cahndida Serkhaman's profile was updated 8 years, 8 months ago
Yesssss, me too! 😀