@bluejay
Active 7 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Ingrid posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
So happy for you, @bluejay! Congratulations!
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Christine Eaton posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
You totally should @bluejay 🙂 Who knows I may have to use some of your stuff. I love quotes, and accidentally stumbling across good ones 🙂
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Greta posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, hey! @bluejay That’s awesome! 😀 😀 😀 😀 CONGRATULATIONS. <3
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Thanks @gretald
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Sarah Hoven posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Since my schedule is so erratic it’s practically nonexistent, maybe I should try to write around yours. When do you usually write?
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Oh dear. What kind of medication is it? I’ll be praying for you, and I hope everything goes well in October/ November, when you stop taking it. How serious is it?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Is it too late to join? because I can’t resist. I love The Hobbit too much! Please say yes!!! @bluejay
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Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
Wow, @bluejay , that’s awesome! 😀
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I hope we get to read some of this stuff …
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@overcomer *taps side of nose* You might… *mysterious grin* 😀
And thanks. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Sea in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.
I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]
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Hannah A. Krynicki posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
Oh, wow @bluejay! That’s awesome! Much applause! 😀
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🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thank you. 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂
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Yay!!! That’s so exciting! I would’ve been so nervous to go up against adults. Good for you! 🙂 Would you mind posting Chaos and The Drummer Boy? I’d sure like to read them. 🙂
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@sarah-h I was nervous. Extremely nervous. I only expected a highly commended. I will definitely let you read Chaos and The Drummer Boy. I shall send them to @spradlin for publishing. (Only with Chaos, it’s a series of stories which if you read number 3. (which this one is) it won’t make much sense. I shall have to send in 1 & 2.
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@bluejay Great! I can’t wait to read them! 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I’m a dragon, what would you expect? I’m a rare species of monstrous nightmare mixed with a night fury. 🙂
I’m allergic to B-calm tablets, doctor…can I take some Vitamin C (chocolate) and maybe Vitamin A-nger? -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I’m a dragon, what would you expect? I’m a rare version of monstrous nightmare mixed with a night fury. 🙂
I’m allergic to B-calm tablets, doctor…can I take some Vitamin C (chocolate) and maybe Vitamin A-nger? -
Daeus posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I have. What does that have to do with this?
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Hope Ann posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
Congratulations, @bluejay!!!!!! That is so exciting!
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@hope I still can’t believe that it’s happened!!!!!!! Thanks.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@daeus @bluejay @dragon-snapper , room for me, I hope? I can write until 9:00 EST
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
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@ingridrd 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thanks.