@bluejay
Active 7 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Jess replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Hi! I’m back again. Thanks for the feedback everyone. I think I have the background info now. What do you think? I’m trying to make it not cliche-ish. 🙂 Thanks a billion! 🙂 🙂 🙂 @emma-flournoy @hope @bluejay @julia-r @overcomer @anne-swiftblade @mark-kamibaya @dragon-snapper
A long time away in a galaxy- just kidding. 300 years…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@bluejay @overcomer @kate-flournoy @jess Would anyone like to write for a while?
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Jess replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@bluejay Shoot! One name in two kingdom series. I was thinking of a different series. My story is set in the future-like one hundred years. *Racks brain for different names* I originally liked Tess, but realized that was in the Kingdom series too.
@julia-r, I forgot to reply last time. of course you can read it, but let me get a few chapter…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
hmm, I echo @bluejay, Love writing it, but can’t critique it. I got here a little late to join the party, but I agree with just about everything everyone else has said. Nice poem! @overcomer
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ClaireC replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
hmm, I echo @bluejay, Love writing it, but can’t critique it though. I got here a little late to join the party, but I agree with just about everything everyone else has said. Nice poem! @overcomer
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I forgot to say earlier, but thanks for writing with me! It was a lot of fun, and I can’t wait to do it again! 🙂
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Jess replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@overcomer, thanks, more to mull over. *sighs* I like the secret rebellion one… But then I still have to figure out the parents thing. Maybe they attempted something similar, but were imprisoned… But why would they have superpowers? *growls* I can’t sleep well when I’m thinking about plot ideas. (anyone else like that?) What do you think…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Oh, cool. I am very curious indeed. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Oops, we were posting at the same time. 🙂 Wow, you did a lot. I got 227 words. How on earth do you fit a story into 100 words? I don’t think I could do that.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay It’s been an hour, but I’m going to keep going a little longer. What about you?
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Of course it is! XD 😀
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Sounds good. I’ll tag you if I have to stop early. Ready…set…write! 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Yay! Let’s do it! How long do you want to go?
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Sarah Hoven posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay That’s great! I’m usually open then, too. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay Great! I can’t wait to read them! 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@bluejay I’m going to write for a bit, if you want to join me. 🙂
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Josiah DeGraaf posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
Wow–that’s awesome @bluejay! Congrats!!!
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Emma Flournoy posted a new activity comment 9 years, 8 months ago
You rock, dude! (How’s that for a Finding Nemo reference. 😛 )
You won ALL the categories??!!
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Sweet…..Totally! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 There were more categories, but those four were the ones I entered. 🙂
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So you won all four of the ones you entered!!
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@emma-flournoy I only got an encouragement award for one of the categories. 🙂
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Oh whoops…it says that. 😛
But still!
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Thanks @aratrea 🙂