@bluejay
Active 6 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Daeus replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay Seems like you did a pretty good job with the huge limitations of trying to fit all those words in there. One thing to note is that the lines:
“His words must be erroneously
They definitely weren’t symmetrically”
are not grammatically correct because of their -ly endings.As far as improvement, because of your limitations, I think your b…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay, hmmm…
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ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay *yawn* I’m too tired tonight, actually. Maybe tomorrow? You know what, I didn’t get your notification earlier, but I was still writing. So we did write together today; we just didn’t know it. 🙂
I’m going to change my notifications from a banner to an alert, which is much more obvious, so hopefully I won’t miss them anymore. 🙂 -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay *yawn* I’m too tired tonight, actually. Maybe tomorrow? You know what, I didn’t get your notification earlier, but I was still writing. So we did write together today; we just didn’t know it. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@clairec @bluejay Remember how I asked you to pray for me being a youth leader? Answered prayer: these past two Sundays the Holy Spirit has really been with me and helped me, and this past Sunday I was able to pray with one of my girls; it was awesome. I love being a youth leader; when the Holy Spirit is with me, and I can sense Him, it’s not…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay That is so creative! And hilarious. 🙂 I like it.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@clairec You have the coolest topic ideas. 🙂 Ooh, you’re a small group leader too?! I will definitely be praying! 🙂 *makes note in diary*
Here’s my prayer request: I might be going on a Mexico missions trip at the end of the year, and I’m trying to teach myself Spanish, but I really need God’s help learning it. Hispanic people speak so fast! So…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay *cracks door open* *peeks in hopefully* Are you there? Can you write soon? 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay *waves farewell back* See ya around.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I’ll start.
I’m one of the crew for a Kid’s bible club at our church these school holidays (in Australia)
Among many things, I’m a small group leader, I’m playing Mary Magdalene in our skit (and I have the responsibility of presenting the gospel message in that) and I’m leading the memory verse on the guitar. Please pray that God would give me…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay, wow! Thank you! 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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ClaireC started the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Write your prayer request and tag at least 5 people to pray for you (so someone definitely sees it.) If you’re tagged as a pray-er then add that person’s request to your personal list, and pray faithfully for them. And prayer-requester, don’t forget to notify your pray-ers when your request is answered, even if it’s not answered in the way you…[Read more]
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ClaireC started the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Write your prayer request and tag at least 5 people to pray for you (so someone definitely sees it.) If you’re tagged as a pray-er then add that person’s request to your personal list, and pray faithfully for them. And prayer-requester, don’t forget to notify your pray-ers when your request is answered, even if it’s not answered in the way you…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay, well you’re probably done by now, but I’m gonna do some beta reading till nine anyways.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay, Sorry I can’t!:( Oh the curse of Schoolwork!! *Screams in desperation* And sorry I missed you yesterday, too. Somehow the notification slipped past without my seeing it! 🙁 I’ll tag you next time I’m writing. Oh, and you can provide the snacks. You are now the official KP doctor and snack-provider. I guess you’ll have to team up with @dae…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Oops, I missed you notification. I am still writing- er, outlining, which isn’t really writing, but I’m still doing it, if you want to join me. 🙂
@bluejay Oh, I hope I can. I have no idea what we’re doing tonight. I’ll try my best, though. 🙂
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Hannah posted a new activity comment 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay I’m so glad!! *smile grows to like three times its size*
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Hannah A. Krynicki replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay So the new deadline is the weekend? Sounds like a plan.
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