BlueJay

@bluejay That verse pretty much sums this topic up for me. 😉

But I say to you that for every idle word men may speak, they will give an account of it in the day of judgement. For by you words you will be justified, and by your words you will be condemned. ~ Matthew 12:36-37

@bluejay That verse pretty much sums this topic up for me.

But I say to you that for every idle word men may speak, they will give an account of it in the day of judgement. For by you words you will be justified, and by your words you will be condemned. ~ Matthew 12:36-37

@anne-of-lothlorien: I have written a short Choose-your-own-Adventure story in second person. It was fun, but incredibly difficult! I can’t imagine doing 2nd person in any other way than a CYOA. That’s one thing I never liked about CYOA’s. Sometimes, they would say things like, “If you decide to chase after the criminal, go to page 8. If you…[Read more]

@bluejay You were right. *tap nose for you*

@dragon-snapper That was my first thought but I’ve seen most of the commercials and didn’t recognize it.

@Mark-Kamibaya What on earth is La-La Land? Isn’t that where people go when they are dreaming?

Here’s a new one.

“Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!”

Now someone HAS to…[Read more]

I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?

But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.

But…[Read more]

I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?

But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.

But…[Read more]

Writin’!
@bluejay @jess @winter-rose @hope @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @overcomer

@bluejay @jess @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @hope @overcomer
Hello? Yes, I’d like to make an order to write? I’ll aim for a couple thousand words, maybe I’ll be here for an hour or so, who knows. I’m hoping others will join.
Alright, thank you, goodbye.
*hangs up phone and settles down to write*

@bluejay @jess @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @hope @overcomer
Hello? Yes, I’d like to make an order to write? Yes, I’ll aim for a couple thousand words, maybe I’ll be here for an hour or so, who knows. Yes, I’m hoping others will join.
Alright, thank you, goodbye.
*hangs up phone and settles down to write*

Sorry I missed you @Dragon-Snapper! Is anyone writing now? 🙂 @Bluejay, @Overcomer, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths @anyone else who’s around

@bluejay One thing you could do is find a sibling or a friend of a sibling or really any child who is in the age range you’re writing for and ask them what they want to see in a story.

Another rout to go all together is try and focus on a real life problem that children have. Maybe a pet dies, or (like @mark-kamibaya said) they move. It doesn’t…[Read more]

@winter-rose @bluejay That would work fine as far as the emails go!

Love it @bluejay, absolutely love it

@Bluejay, yep, right behind you. I wrote 1,520 words. Two edits? That’s pretty good 😀

@Bluejay, I’ll be going for about fifteen more minutes.

@Dragon-snapper, nice. 🙂

@bluejay @jess I’ll be going now… Pretty much, I jotted down my thoughts of what conflicts I could use onto paper. Good luck!

@Bluejay and @Dragon-snapper, I’ll be going longer. 🙂

@daeus I worked on a character map and wrote half of a notebook page description of a certain setting or another. Mostly, I was actually on the course-language topic. Woops. 😛 And good job! Glad its coming back!
@jess @bluejay I’m still going for a bit. I need to get something productive done, like plot…

@daeus I worked on a character map and wrote half of a notebook page description of a certain setting or another. Mostly, I was actually on the course-language topic. Woops. 😛
@jess @bluejay I’m still going for a bit. I need to get something productive done, like plot…