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@mariposa  It’s just perfect.  This definitely calls for a party.  Chocolate, anyone?

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Okay, I think I have the names down (except for the consensus with Tristan and Kenneth)… So what do I title the thing?? XD

Okay, so here, combined with the polls I left on the YWWC, we have…

Camille 10

Celeste 9

Iridian 4

Lashawn 0

Deshaun 2

Raphael 12

Kenneth 8

Tristan 8

Lachlan 5

Kenneth and Tristan seem to be pretty popular, but the names are pretty clear for the other two (especially for who will now be called Raphael!)

@xonos-darkgrate I think I recognize the second one from the Avengers: Infinity War trailer… Is it Thanos? And is three Ultron? I’m not sure though. My Avengers knowledge is a bit rusty 😛

@mariposa  Well, sci-fi doesn’t have anything to do with KP, soooooooooo…

@mariposa  AAAH! Don’t steal my thunder!!!!

It’s still awesome! 😉

@mariposa This is fantastic. 😀

Tagging @the-real-kapeefer for good measure.

@Mariposa I think I’m dying. XD XD XD

@mariposa These are great. 😀

I believe Gracie and Sierra are @graciegirl and @sierra-r

@Mariposa good heavens, I think I’m dying. XD XD XD

@sleepwalkingmk *grins ear to ear* This is so sweet!! Let’s see… I like how you set the scene, but I also think you should spend more time talking about what the narrator is thinking. It’s a little idle right now, talking mostly about the things going on around her. It’s still awesome though! Also, “a while” is one word: “awhile.” 🙂

Nice job!! 😉

@xonos-darkgrate  My dad was laid off too! We’re in this together!! 😁😉 Anyways, yeah I’ll definitely pray for you!

I didn’t mind that section, but I definitely know some people who would be bothered. As long as you have a connection, cause yeah, like Kate said, it kinda did feel drop you random in the middle of gore and evil for no reason, out of context like that.

About the swear words things. Obviously, top swear words are out. Then you get into the picky…[Read more]

@aratrea Clearly I need to get on the forum more, but putting someone’s username underneath their actual name to save all that extra clicking was a stroke of genius.

@amy-l-klob *sweeps hat off and bows with a flourish* Always an honor to be of service to writers of the Kingdom 😉

@dekreel, any ideas on how I can tweak them? And which ones need major tweaking?

@Xonos-darkgrate what @Daeus and the rest already said, basically, on the general subject.

I did, however, find your excerpt slightly disturbing, which is odd, because I’m not usually disturbed by that kind of stuff. It may have been because it lacked subtlety and I kind of just felt like I had my face shoved in a pool of blood for no reason and…[Read more]