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@salome01w4g  Ohh, I’m so thankful! That has to be one of the most dramatic Christmas stories ever! The perfect gift: a place to live! 😉 Praise God!

@salome01w4g  Praise the Lord!  *bear hug*

@ingridrd  @gabbyj  Thank you! I had fun with both of them 🙂

@salome01w4g  I’m praying for you, friend.  Hang in there!

@dekreel  Thank youuuuu!!!!  I lover her, especially the eyes!!!!

Identical thoughts to @daeus Good premise, and if the entire story isn’t going to be as dark in the first chapters, you just want to include enough glimpses of light to indicate that. I don’t personally have a problem with dark, depressing stories when there’s a point to them, but you don’t want to unintentionally indicate that’s the type of story…[Read more]

@his-instrument I love the plot line.

I don’t know if I’ll be able to read the first chapters, but just some thoughts. I think you can set a tone in these first chapters that lets your reader know you’re not out to scare them. If you don’t get too graphic with the murder and torture scene and you give the reader one or two, morally good, hopeful…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking  @salome01w4g  As am I, actually! Me too, please!  And N.C. I’ll definitely pray for you 😉

@his-instrument  I love the storyline!

It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit…?

Anyway, sure! I’ll read it. 🙂

Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though…

@daeus  @aratrea  @sam-kowal  @seekjustice  @jane-maree  @princessfoo  @introvert_girl

(P.S. This is comple…[Read more]

Oh, no!! 🙁 🙁 🙁

Oh, great. Now you’re making me nervous about cars! ;P

Praying hard!! *big hug*

@catwing Fred from Big Hero 6!

@seekjustice oh good.

sadly i must sign off to go and watch doctor who with my family…

@catwing What’s the new quote? 😀

@seekjustice, you have an army of magical origami cranes???? can you lend me some for my fight against unruly characters?

@seekjustice  I might have not seen it the first time. *shrug* Anyway, thank you!!

@daeus  @introvert_girl  Okay thanks! 🙂

@catwing  Not bad! My favorite line: “I can cut your cake into perfect fifths! The most perfect fifths!”

LOLOL!

@catwing, yes, in fact. if I’m in the next one make me the perfect character. kidding, that would be boring.

Oh, theres a cliché for you. the perfect boring character that accidentally makes into every book that the author thinks is going to be everyones favorite character. but is really everyones least favorite.