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@Dekreel Well, I’ve been side-tracked with novel-writing and blogging. But…I still feel stuck with it, if you know what I mean.

I’m going to try to write some to my novel. Get over this first ten chapter hump. 1000 words, Snapper, that’s all you need.

One. Thousand. Words.

@dragon-snapper  Still? Awwww

What are you working on right now?

@dekreel

@dragon-snapper  Heheh, I would have LOVED the view from the windows though!

Any progress in LOKD3?

@dekreel Ah yes, that part. The boring apartment. XD That was probably five then, but I can’t remember either.

@dragon-snapper  I think I just finished installment five. Or four. Ike had just met Kaydon and is now in his boring apartment

@dekreel Yay! How far are you through it?

@dragon-snapper  Hi!! Sure! 😀

BTW I have been reading the first Sector One book. I’m enjoying it! 🙂

@dekreel I’m just about to join you (most likely), but give me just a moment. 😀

@dragon-snapper  @catwing  @aislinn-mollisong  @winter-rose  @whoever

I’m writing! I think I’m editing my DWN again…

(One thousandth post! O_o)

@rochellaine  Right. That was just a suggestion. I think maybe you should take out ONE of her dialogues since she has two. That way you’ll hint at her importance….. A little structural foreshadowing for ya! 😉

(I actually have no idea if “structural foreshadowing” is actually a thing XD )

Edit: GAAAAA! GUYS I’M AN ECCENTRIC MENTOR!! ……

@rochellaine  Wonderful, thanks! I made some comments 🙂

@clairec  Wow 🙂

I’ve done a fetal pig, a frog, an owl pellet………. and one or two other things that I can’t remember

@emily-d  You don’t like “All I Need is You?!” Why?

My two favorite songs by Hollyn are “Obvious?” and “Girl” I also really like “In Awe”

@jenwriter17

Like @audrey-caylin said, the biggest thing you can do to build your base and bring people to your blog is comment and build relationships with other bloggers. I’ve had to do that myself.

Unexpected… Actually, the main thing that I didn’t expect was how much I’ve enjoyed it. There’s not much that I haven’t liked so far. But you…[Read more]

@rochellaine AH! I love the plotline. I really want to know what happens. Like really. Write more now.

The only things I think you need to do is add some paragraph breaks–those make it easier to read. And try to use the word ‘so’ less. It’s alright to use it with this guys style, but a bit less would be better.

It’s also a bit fast-paced. If…[Read more]