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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, do you like ballet? I wouldn’t have thought so.
The Victorian era had very interesting standards of modesty. 😉 Showing your ankle was considered obscene and scandalous, and yet showing shoulders and even a bit of cleavage was common during certain events. I don’t think it would be appropriate for going out in the daytime, bu…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Well, I am watching a bit of Tchaikovsky’s Swan Lake on YouTube. I found a version where they don’t die in the end, but kill the villain instead. 😀 I think I probably needed that after being reminded of Zac tonight. 😉
Hm, I don’t like Victorian fashion much, but go ahead, shoot, and I’ll see if I can help.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Aw. 🙂 Well, I’m here now. 😀 What are we going to talk about tonight?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice I’m back. 🙂 Is everyone else gone?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice I’ll be back in a little while.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@alia I would picture it sort of like the sod shanties or dugouts from Little House on the Prairie. Those are like cottages, but they are a bit disguised.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@alia Yes, like the Bible says, evil is thought good, and good is thought evil. 🙁 It’s quite possible for guys to be “cool” without being bad, but a lot of people don’t realize that. 😛
@seekjustice Quillon is really sweet. Forgive me, but even with his strength in protecting Sapphire I think he’s not quite as strong as Justice or Zac (…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yes, I think the term can be used as a sort of endearment, but I don’t think I was too harsh in my assessment. SeekJustice rather was. 😛 Since “bad” has been getting worse in modern society, what’s considered just a normal, cute and rule-bending guy, by non-Christians I would consider to be a pretty awful person, probably. Li…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
And…a random announcement because I just want people who go through and read all these posts to know…
I don’t like Zac because of his “bad boy” character traits. I despised him when I started to read the book, and thought he was an annoying and horrible person. I like him because he got better and changed, and at the end of the book is no l…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Okay, I wonder if it’s an American thing? Usually when I hear the term “bad boy” it’s used to define the rule-bender who doesn’t believe in much but is very charismatic and the girls fall for him quick as a wink. I could be wrong about this, let’s ask @jenwriter17 😛
The other guys…oh, don’t even mention Dorian Gray. He’s too ba…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice What? Zac isn’t the “bad boy” type? He’s got iffy morals, gets drunk all the time, is crazily flirtatious with a girl he doesn’t even know, and hates his cousin because his cousin is “good”…and he’s not a bad boy? I’m curious to know what your definition of a bad boy is, in that case. 😮 😛 I mean, yeah, he’s not in a gang and…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice I pictured him darker and with shorter hair. Zac doesn’t seem a long, smooth hair guy to me, but a guy who would have short, slightly combed and slightly awry hair. Maybe a younger version of Robbie Amell?

Also, I guess maybe the pictures you picked would be a little how I’d picture him when he first appears, all annoying and a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Why did he have to die!!!!!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Oh my goodness. OH my GOODNESS!!! *sobs* oh, wow.
I nearly cried, seriously, but couldn’t because I was also smiling. 😉 I love all the quotes. Zac looks a little different than I pictured him, but I can live with that. 😛
Oh, wow. *sniffs*
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@seekjustice Oh the torture! 😛 We had guests in the house this morning when you posted at 8:00 and I couldn’t respond to ask you what you were talking about. When they left, a little before noon, I knew you would be asleep, so I was going to wait until about 4:00 (my time) which is when you usually seem to wake up, but then this evening I r…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@catwing Okay, I’m going to say goodnight now. Your story looks great! Like I said, I loved the realistic sound of it, because that made it feel close to me and like I could understand and feel what was going on with Alex. Good job.
And goodnight. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Betas Wanted: QOD in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
@valtmy Well, I have finals in about three weeks, so I’m going to do some intense studying preparing for that. I’ll try to be on here once in a while but I’m not sure.
I started reading your chapters but haven’t had a chance to finish them or comment yet. I guess you’ll see when I do, anyway. 🙂 I am liking it so far.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@ariel-ashira Goodnight! Hope to see you sometime soon. Have fun on your trip, whenever you take it. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@ariel-ashira Hm…I guess I could try to be more clear in conversations of which you are a part from now on. What would help to clarify when I’m joking? More emojis? Or a “by the way, Ariel, this conversation is a joke” at the beginning and end of each section? Tell me what you need to see so that you won’t get hurt or confused.
I am ser…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@catwing I’m sorry, I got your invitation to edit and my computer’s acting up and won’t let me see the document. I’m going to try to get on another computer…all the way downstairs…the big desktop…let you know how that goes… 😛
@ariel-ashira Oh goodness. I’m sorry if my sarcasm is ambiguous to you! Please forgive me. I have learned tha…[Read more]
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