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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy 🙂 Okay, I’ll try to get to your chapters soon. Right now, though, I’ve got to go to sleep. 😀 I have completely disregarded Jen’s advice to go to bed early, but I definitely need to sleep now! 😛
See you later! Goodnight.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy Haha! 😛 I think if it were animated a lot of those decisions would go to the animator. 😉 But I really like your descriptions of the characters! My MC definitely thinks he’s smart, but isn’t, and the way he describes the nurse as fainting like a Hollywood actress does give you the picture that she’s as you say, a “brainless beauty w…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy I was actually thinking the same thing!! I just don’t know how I would get it to be filmed. Maybe I’ll ask Leumeister if he’s interested. I think he sometimes does animation. What would you think of an animated short with my story as the voice-over and the animated characters acting it out?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy That’s an interesting idea. I don’t know that I would do it with this story. I’m more inclined to agree with @seekjustice that it’s a simple, slapstick story and doesn’t need depth to make sense, because it’s not supposed to make sense. 😉 However, right now I have one of you on either side, so I’ll just talk to a few other people an…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Goodbye, and please treat your patients better than my doctors and nurses treat theirs! 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Thank you! That is how I intended it, so when Valtmy said it should be more realistic I was kind of confused. I like realistic, but there’s a time and place for very unrealistic stuff as well. 😉 I just wanted to put a piece of craziness together, and I think that worked. 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Ah, perfect. 😛 My sister has fallen asleep (which is actually a good thing…) so I can’t show her the story. 🙁 I can’t wait until tomorrow morning, because it’s the type of story she’ll love.
I have a question. You gave me a lot of corrections on my medical personnel in my Western, so you’re probably the perfect person to ask a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I assume that means you liked it? 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy @seekjustice Oh, I don’t think I allowed you commenting access. If you want to comment, but can’t, you can probably use this link instead:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ip03RKu7GSdClJGsrcOW22wiwnEGXpiZvw2AFhHfOSo/edit?usp=sharing
Or you can just tell me what you think here. 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy Okay, so when you said you were writing comedy, (yes, I already knew you were writing comedy, but you know sometimes your brain does different things at different times, right?) my brain had a flash that went something like “I love writing comedy. I should write a comedy short story.” and then I started to write. Starting from the f…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy It’s almost done. Give me a few more minutes. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice @valtmy Sorry for kind of disappearing! I didn’t really go anywhere, it’s just that Valtmy gave me a great idea for a very short story and I got caught up in writing it and forgot to post for a while. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy Sort of. 🙂 I’ve written enough that I could post it, but nothing exciting happens in any of the scenes I’ve written lately, since they’re just resolution scenes for the earlier excitements. I was planning to wait until I at least had something new that would be a little bit interesting before posting the next section.
I don’t want to b…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Mm, sounds good! I love Chinese food, but it gives me a stomachache, so…there’s always that balance when I have the chance to eat it. 😛 Oh, pasta is also a dish we eat a lot. Mostly when my dad isn’t home, though, since he thinks pasta is bland. 😉 My mom makes a good spicy lasagna, though, that he does enjoy.
You’ll never gue…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy Hello! What are you working on? How is it going?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@jenwriter17 Okay, I’m not sure if I’ll be on tomorrow, but if I am, I hope to see you then! 🙂
😛 Thanks for the advice. I’ll try to take it! (Notice, I said TRY. 😉 )
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I haven’t listened to much yet, since I turned it off so I could read something I’m researching, but the start of it sounds like it’s going to be interesting.
Did you have a good lunch? Say, you know what I eat, (Middle Eastern food,) but I don’t know what you eat… 😉 What did you have?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I don’t write very well when I’m listening to music. I usually listen to music to get inspiration, then turn it off to write. But in between writing I’m starting to listen to the Lost in the Stars soundtrack. I’ve never listened to it before, so we’ll see how I like it. 🙂 Did you read the plot of that musical? Do you reme…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Congratulations! 🙂 Okay, I guess that means you’ll be leaving for lunch soon, though.
Listened to or sung anything interesting today?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I’m back now. How about you?
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