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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I think I’ll add another character after the fight is over, if that’s alright. Or guess technically two characters. One and a half? I should go back and check how many character slots we’re allowed.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
I’m not exactly sure if I agree with you about God ever wanting Christians to lie, but I get that you’re voicing your own beliefs and I understand why you don’t want to change it. However, just be aware that it might be a slightly controversial topic.
Anyway, I love the plot twist. Great job with the details leading up to it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
The chunky creatures loomed over them, casting shadows over the soaked ground. They walked without sight or feeling, without head movement.
Someone cried out. It was the man with wind powers. He cradled his hand, and when the other young men…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
You and me both, girl. But it looks like your world-building is paying off :]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper Yay! Freakiness is the intention :]
And yes, lots of world building. And re-world building. I still have zero plot tho
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to
Well, that’s the freakiest name for robotic machines I’ve ever heard. *Eyes you suspiciously* Have you been worldbuilding for something?
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh whoops we’ve been forgetting to tag @hybridlore
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle My character doesn’t even have military training. She’s just… very determined.
@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas @raeFelicity— Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand
“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to, but she didn’t care…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Are all the roleplayers allowed to deploy ironwalkers?
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whaley replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@theducktator
We’re watching the BBC version right now (cough, Challenge 2 homework, cough) and it’s pretty accurate to the book. ☺️ The newer movie isn’t too bad though either, so if that’s what you have access to, I wouldn’t dissuade you. -
Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Well I was going to jump into that fight scene, but now I’m stuck again
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
We do need a plan, do we want to get out of the city?
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
Marcel cocked his head, amused, and shook his fists to loosen them back to normal. “You could have left us a couple soldiers…”
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
The BBC series XD
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I’m so glad you’ve been drawing and coloring so much! 🤣 It’s been a couple years and we can finally see your own imaginings of your characters.
Ooh he looks like Mr. Darcy. I’m watching Pride & Prejudice right now, lol.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/ Group 1)
More soldiers raced in. Marcel clenched his hands, and feathers laced around his fingers. Kicking up water, he swerved around around Ellis, who acted as final flaming barricade.
He deflected a sword with his staff. The soldier barked an unpleasant…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
Marcel backed up a little, and the others in his group stepped forward. “Maybe there is nothing for it but to move on, find another city.”
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle Ok, I read it! I missed Adrian’s reintro, somehow. Sorry.
I’ll thrash a teenager any day, (particularly a guy. They can take it) but little kids……… Oh well. It’s for the good of the book, and may be for his good too.
Only thing I really noticed about that scene was some typos—and in Aaron’s letter, he repeats “Joseph” over a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle The one you just sent… I think 😅 I guess I missed the other scene.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@grcr Aw, love it!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔
Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!
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