@awsumfaith
Active 1 year, 9 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I just realized you might still be deciding all this. I’m sorry if this is not something you’re confident on. Questioning dystopian premises is what I do every time I read a book with this stuff.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Meaning? Is America taken over by another country and that country is the one making the laws?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I get that. I was actually saying I don’t see how that’s a viable strategy for a country right after a world war and civil war.
This is the thing I said that I’m most concerned about:
Because you just said family is what the men believe is worth fighting for, and if this is still America and they’re ravaged this badly, w…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
actually, there is a bill that got passed by america allowing homosexual couples to have children
I’m not sure what this has to do with my questions. *Mind-scattered confusion* Am I just not understanding the link between this and what I asked?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Wait, is this still the American government enacting everything or is this another country controlling it? Because you just said family is what the men believe is worth fighting for, and if this is still America and they’re ravaged this badly, wouldn’t they want people to have a fighting motive? Taking family away just makes…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Mel
“Um… Okay then.” Mel scooped up the snail and slowly climbed down, staring at the creature in her hand the whole time. She came to stand next to Lucy, and looked up at her blankly. “So who’s they?”
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
We’ll see.
That’s the fun of not knowing how your own story will turn out in the end, I suppose. You can’t plan everything. (One side of me wishes it were possible, though.)
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Without a family to fight and provide for, men loose their purpose. (It was actually a strategy developed by communist Russia though it was never fully established)
That’s really interesting. I’ll have to look into it. Sometimes I hear about a government control strategy I didn’t know about previously and sometimes it’s like “o…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Delightfully whimsical-sounding! I shall look at what you sent me. It’s been a log time since I read the perspective of an unrelatable narrator.
What kind of prophecy is it?
Actually I should just start reading instead of asking you. But you can answer if the answer isn’t a big spoiler and doesn’t show up in what you sent me.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
In a country where true family is forbidden and marriage is a crime
Not to entirely derail the KP title drama, but I was just thinking about your blurb. I may have asked this question when you first talked about this but I don’t remember 😅 How does this work? Why is marriage a crime?
I feel like this would be an interesting…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
As far as titles go, I always thought of you as kp’s local cryptid because of your elusive and random nature lol
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
but have you all actually been trained to fight with them? 😂
Depends on exactly what you mean by training, but how is this at all writing/ kp related?
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
I just don’t like how they’re treated as more important/impactful than other stories.
Exactly
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
I’m honestly a bit tired of dark stuff and stories that “deal with hard themes”.
I’m always a little annoyed when people say we need more writers dealing with darkness in their stories. Literally 90% of the WIPs I’ve heard about have dark themes like PTSD and abuse, and a lot of published books are the same.
I write dark themes so I don…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
It does feel kinda like it at times…I’m actually working this whimsy story of fairies, libraries, and evil people eating woods right now that I haven’t introduced here because…*shrugs*
Ma’am. Please introduce your story in more detail. I am currently working on a whimsy story of fairies, cozy homes, and evil people-eating rabbits. We have…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
That would be awesome! Idk when I’ll have time to read it exactly, but I will
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
I’m honestly a bit tired of dark stuff and stories that “deal with hard themes”. We need more silliness and whimsy. The real world is full of it. Maybe we should reflect it more in our writing.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
That sounds absolutely wonderful. I love whimsy. And fairies. Loving fairies was like my whole personality the first two thirds of my life. Please do share if you feel up to it.
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
The Local Amnesiac
Relatable
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
I feel like “Rhymer” sounds like someone who does a lot of poetry?
Also I have no idea what age group my stories are for when I’m writing them, but I definitely have a few that feel like children’s books.
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