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  • in reply to: I’m beginning a novel….thoughts? #173459
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      Those are all really great suggestions! Thank you for your help. I was wondering how to approach writing a scene where the children encounter a dwarf like being that shows them an exit out of the ice, an extremely small hole with no light. But Jude still needs to conquer his fear of tight spaces. I’m just not really sure how to go about it. Seeing as the scene takes place only half way through the story should he still struggle with this fear or just overcome it at this point? If anybody has any suggestions, that would be terrific.

      in reply to: Naming Chapters! #163676
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        Thank you everyone! I feel like I have a bit of a better idea of what to do now.

        in reply to: Greetings from a new member! #144823
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          Thanks for not asking any more questions!  !)

          I have a hectic schedule currently. I do want to get around to answering all those questions. I never knew one could ask so much! Thank you all for the warm welcome.

          in reply to: Chapter 2! #144604
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            A bit. I do have a few little side stories with some couples.

            in reply to: Raven’s Quest, I’M FINALLY SHARING IT #144593
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              I love the whole story. The way you present it, your writing style, your vocabulary, it is amazing! Got to say that I am genuinely curious and need to know more about Raven. Does she make it to the healer? Does the healer even have what she needs?

              Keep writing! Hope that you do something with your story later. This is good and needs to be shared!

              in reply to: Chapter 2! #144592
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                Sorry I forgot to fill it the chapters! got distracted. Its 27 chapters in the 2nd book and 34 in the 3rd book. So far, I plan on having somewhere around 42 chapters in the 4th book but I’m currently writing chapter 26.

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                  Also, Felicity is in fact 13 and her brother is 15. The world does have more to it, including some strange creatures and dragons.

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                    No, the story has an internal conflict (Felicity’s own problems that she is grappling with) and an external conflict. Both of which widen as the story goes on. Towards the end of this first book I start to develop this character even more and show things that caused her to act out as she did in the first chapter. I actually did want the reader to have an impression of immaturity!

                    in reply to: Greetings from a new member! #144477
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                      Hi, Min. I think that my favorite thing to write would be science fiction, mostly my own made up worlds.

                      And some of my favorite themes to write about is finding courage in hard, difficult times just because that is something I feel like I need an abundance of and love to encourage people.

                      Lastly, I’m not a huge fan of holding snakes but I do think that they’re cool as long as they aren’t trying to bite me!

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