Audrey Caylin

@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more]

*blinks* Oh, well, I wasn’t expecting it to be so sad… *blinks again to hide the fact that she’s crying* Okay. I’ll need to read this over again before I can give anything constructive, but otherwise, good story! It’s really well written, and the plot seems smooth and easy to follow.

I’ll come back if I think of anything else.

@daeus

Even the king is against me.

@ingridrd *cough* Dragons are our friends.
*flies off so as not to be beaten*

There. I made one!
The picture came from Pexels…the quote came from me.

@anne-of-lothlorien
Hehehehe, yup, I tooootally ride a Kangeroo. All of us Aussie blokes do. *shakes head in silent laughter*
The entire poem was great!!!

Oh wow! That’s great! @emily-d

@dragon-snapper HAHAHA What a pure coincidence I just finished watching that movie just now!!

@emily I have watched the Princess Bride! It’s been a while!

@aratrea Hehe, doesn’t he!

@lifeofkatie Hi! Great to meet you! *Energetically shakes your hand, blushing like some sort of manga-girl maniac*

@emma-flournoy Yup, especially in Texas. It’s practically celebrated as a holiday

@daughteroftheking There’s Viking in my blood! (Really! I’m descended from Vikings! :-D) I will! *marches out into a world of new ides*

@kate-flournoy, @jess-penrose, @jane-maree

Thank you all for your advice! I appreciate it!! 😉

Jane, lengthy is okay! 😉

*Raises eyebrows* And that is why I asked you @jane-maree. You are way better than I am at explaining. Thanks!

@Dekreel something to think about is that Catcher in the Rye is about a character going on an adventure, and the reader experiencing his thoughts and emotions along the way.
I could list many many books that have this same vague plot. If I look at my bookshelf, there’s half a dozen that I see immediately which I could say had that idea as…[Read more]

@dekreel XD The arrival of Fall is indeed a glorious thing. 😀

@Daeus Righto.

@dekreel
Never read it, however, all books are about someone on a journey. If it includes their thoughts, then there you go. Aside from that, I have no clue.
If you add in more of a story line and have a unique form of character development, then the story is your own.
Not sure if that was any help.
@jane-maree Do you have any thoughts?

@emily @catwing Welp…I unfortunately have to sign out now, but it would seem that you two are in different time zones than I. Read you all around. Enjoy your music…and living. 😛

@catwing @emily

@dekreel same. I know it’s a classic but I’ve never read it. 🙁

But as far as unique and compelling stories go… when you think about it, all stories are pretty much a mash-up of the same storylines being used over and over again. What makes them their own is what the author uses them to say. When a new voice picks up an old story, new depths…[Read more]

@emily Enya! (Watch, I’m not going to die this time) *lives* Isn’t it awesome! 😀

Well, I was listening to some videogame music, but it was scratchy, so I turned to my battle playlist.