Audrey Caylin

Thank you all very much! I will look into the changes
@daughteroftheking Don’t feel bad – my English teacher didn’t get it the first time either!

@Dekreel to tone it down from being so dark, you could change the aspects of fear and horror/dismay that the tree feels, to a sense of confusion and curiosity. That would shift the mood from ‘scary’ to a much lighter feel.

A way to avoid so much of the human terminology you can use similes instead. Saying “I feel a great, pulsing joy in my heart”…[Read more]

@catwing I do like easter eggs (of both the dairy variety and the hidden one). I often put them in my own stories!
Good night (sounds so weird saying that. Its lunch time here ) good job! I FINISHED MY OUTLINE! I’m very excited!
All right, signing off now.

@catwing well i can’t read the sexond book till I’ve read the first!

@emily you write hf? I love historical and I write a lot of war stories, it was kind of an obsession.
@catwing make frogs happy?? *frowns to herself* what? I am really anxious to read this now!

@emily I’m currently editing but once I’ve done half an hour of editing I’ll do some outlining for my NaNo novel.
It can be really hard to finish a project, especially when its something so long and time consuming as a novel, but the feeling of havinv finished it is absolutely amazing. Its definitely worth pushing through even when you don’t like…[Read more]

@emily welcome welcome!
@catwing I think I take that back, you must be crazy :D. I seriously struggle with lots and lots of POVs. But there are some people who ca pull it off really well, so I suppose you must be one of them. Good luck with it anyway!

@catwing after almost completing my outline i know what you mean about character development. My villain and my antagonist both need fleshing out. I saw one of your earlier posts too. Eight povs? Eek you are brave 🙂 I’ve never tried more than three, I think.

@catwing pretty good! I’m moving much faster through my editing now that I’ve finished my rewriting. I’m almost finished my outline for my NaNo novel too.

Anyone?

@dragon-snapper, @jane-maree, @kate-flournoy, @daeus

@catwing I’ll be on in about half an hour. 😀

@kballen Haha love it!

Here’s mine:

“The journey of life isn’t about trying
to weather the storm, it’s about learning
to dance in the rain.”

@ingridrd I’m back…but if anyone comes along claiming I must return to the gold from whence I came, I don’t know what I’ll do. Especially is someone says:

that.
@salome01w4g *lights your sword* Go forth and conquer!

@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.

*sigh*

My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀

*gasps* *runs to tackle-hug the dozen or so Webkinz in her closet*

Anyway. Enough of my antics. @ingridrd The story does, as @kate-flournoy mentioned, give off a sort of Toy Story vibe, but there’s a sort of open-ended thrill to it that almost begs for more. And I love, love the way you wrote “Pubby”. The childlike, wondering sort of style with…[Read more]