@audrey-caylin
Active 8 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Joy replied to the topic Glaring Plot Holes! HELP! in the forum Plotting 8 years, 8 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong Hmmmm…
I agree with Ben and N.C..
If they were summoned on the journey, maybe whoever summoned them could tell them to leave the dragons behind, at least, to an extent. And if they weren’t summoned…
Have them get inadvertently separated from the dragons. Like maybe when they’re trying to escape the rockslide, or w…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Just a bunch of stick people. Nothing to see here… in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths It made sense to make you a bird 🙂
@inkling-for-christ Thank you!! I enjoyed it
@daeus X) 😉
@kballen Thanks!! (Have we met?)
@aislinn-mollisong LOL Yeah, Xonos was my favorite one to draw (next to Daeus and Daniel)
@graciegirl I thought you’d like that! “Zikers” sounded a lot like a superhero catchphrase so… :-D…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 8 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong Woah. That is weird.
Yeah, if you don’t mind giving me your email that would definitely be fine. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic *waves manically* ;P in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 8 months ago
@graciegirl YAHOO! YOU’RE BACK! 😀
I throw ice cream around in your honor! 😀 🍦🍦🍦🍦
Um…
Well, I started a blog. Silver Phoenix
😀So glad you’re back, Gracie! 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Sector One: Insurrection – Betas in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’ll be sure to tag you. I will after all, need something after beta-readers for the finishing touches. 😀
@dekreel Nope. Never too late. 😀
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Worry not. I totally understand that. 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Just a bunch of stick people. Nothing to see here… in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
No worries. They are curved so that they don’t drag on the ground or get in the road too much. They were used by cavalry officers, I believe.
I hadn’t even noticed the cranes (I’m looking at it on my phone and I practically need a magnifying glass). But they’re so cute!! I love them. *hugs all the tiny origami cranes*
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Joy replied to the topic Just a bunch of stick people. Nothing to see here… in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice Sorry! I had no idea what a saber looked like. Google didn’t help at all XD
Thank you!!! I had fun 😀 (origami cranes are tricky to draw…)
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Just a bunch of stick people. Nothing to see here… in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
I LOVE this! I love me too (for future reference though, sabress are slightly curved. They aren’t quite straight). I love how haughty Catwing looks too.
And Aberdeen is a very sophisticated dinosaur. 😁
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Joy started the topic Just a bunch of stick people. Nothing to see here… in the forum Art 8 years, 8 months ago
Well, I guess there is something worth glancing through…
I spent all night working on a bunch of Stick-Kapeefers… XD

And some closeups for your benefit 🙂




@dragon-snapper @graciegirl @catwing @lady-iliara @daeus @inkling-for-christ @daughteroftheking @seekjustice @xonos-darkgrate @sam-kowal @KAPEEFERS!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’m also terrible at coming up with titles!
I think it will be good! Don’t necessarily change what you have here, but give it your own special twist ;D
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel oh, lol, they stole it from me! 😜
@seekjustice @dekreel i forgot to ask if anyone had any title ideas for this idea too. Guardians of Airos is the name of the series, but I’m terrible at figuring out titles.
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Joy replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17Â LOL
Actually the reason I like it is because there’s a character in Dr Who named Tegan. Different spelling, but still cool X)
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel okay, I love action too! fight scenes galore!!!
heehee, thank you, me too! I enjoyed getting unique names like, Jada, Keegan, Axel, Bentlix, Trex, Aubrina, and such…
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice okay, got it! is there a specific date you would like it back by? I’m actually still on Christmas break, so I’m not sure how much will get done in the next week (spendin’ time with the family, ya know). But when school starts again I’ll be able to read more.
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Joy replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 It sounds fine! Just be sure there’s a bit of action. I love action 😉
Also I LOVE the name Taegan!!!
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Snapper replied to the topic Silver Phoenix in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
Yay! Thanks so much everyone! 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@seekjustice thank you! i was afraid it might be a bit common too. i’ll have to keep brainstorming!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Created in His Image in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 8 months ago
@itisastarrynight no worries!
(Also, I’m confused about your signature? What on earth does it mean?)
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Guardians of Airos blurb in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@jenwriter17 it sounds pretty good. the premise is a fairly common one, so maybe you could try twisting it in some way, adding a really good plot twist that the reader won’t see coming, such as making the villain less obvious, or making it one of the guardians themselves, or even her mentor. A few twists on this idea, I think, would make a really…[Read more]
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