Audrey Caylin

@emily-d  You don’t like “All I Need is You?!” Why?

My two favorite songs by Hollyn are “Obvious?” and “Girl” I also really like “In Awe”

@jenwriter17

Like @audrey-caylin said, the biggest thing you can do to build your base and bring people to your blog is comment and build relationships with other bloggers. I’ve had to do that myself.

Unexpected… Actually, the main thing that I didn’t expect was how much I’ve enjoyed it. There’s not much that I haven’t liked so far. But you…[Read more]

@mariposa Thank you! I was thinking of going with WordPress maybe, hosted by BlueHost (I think that’s what it’s called) Do they only limit story space only if you don’t own the domain? Like with .wordpress.com?

@audrey-caylin Forgot to ask; is Caylin a middle name? Would this pen name go on the books you publish?

@daeus @notawriter @sam-kowal Thank you all! This gives me stuff to think about…

@rochellaine AH! I love the plotline. I really want to know what happens. Like really. Write more now.

The only things I think you need to do is add some paragraph breaks–those make it easier to read. And try to use the word ‘so’ less. It’s alright to use it with this guys style, but a bit less would be better.

It’s also a bit fast-paced. If…[Read more]

@rochellaine  I like it! I love how casual the narrator sounds. Except he sounds a little too bumbly to me. It’s an interesting story, but I think I would cut out some of the “bumbling” if you know what I mean. That would make it much more interesting in my opinion. But then again, I personally favor action. What can I say? *shrug*

Anyway, I…[Read more]

@clairec  Hehe, do you like biology? I think it’s cool! What have you dissected?

@waterlily  Haha, that’s perfect! I might use that… Ohh, unless you’re already using it, which is fine XD

@clairec  She said she did it when she was eight or something, so I doubt it

*looks at fish brain picture*  Eww…..  Cooooooooooll

(I like biology XP )

@rochellaine  Oh, that’s funny!! Good signature choice! 😉

@mnvalentine  Okay! I’ll write an article!! Not sure about the book though XD

@audrey-caylin No, your response wasn’t confusing at all! Very helpful, actually. 👍Thank you for all your advice, I have been considering a pen name….

@gh24682468999 Thank you too!

@skredder Thanks! I’ll continue to look for ways I can make my story more unique.

@aratrea I’ll look forward to that video!!!

@rochellaine

Okay, I’m sorry that I misinterpreted you! I’m glad we’re in agreement on this. I’ll attempt to explain it all better as I revise it. And yes, I definitely tried to portray Justice as unhealthily obsessed with his country (at this point, he doesn’t believe in God, no).

Yes, that all made sense! And no, I don’t believe that all…[Read more]

@clairec  LOL @jane-maree Also kissed a frog, I think

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@rochellaine

Thanks so much for answering those questions!

I like the point you raised about revolution. I don’t like war or fighting at all, but I would never call myself a pacifist. I believe there is a time and a place for war, and I believe that one of the reasons we should fight is to protect those who cannot protect themselves. at the…[Read more]