Audrey Caylin

@rochellaine

Oh, really? That’s what I wanted to do for a long time. I don’t know if its what I want to do/what God’s calling me to do anymore, but I still love planes 😀 A lot.

I don’t particularly like the name Tabitha, but it does have good connotations for me, since there’s the really cool Tabitha/Dorcas in the Bible and I knew a girl called…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Proabably a lot more than most people. 😀 I’ve even had a few lessons.

Poor Uncle Bill! Send him my love *blows kisses and hugs at Uncle Bill*

By the way, what do you think Quillon’s sister might be named? I’m thinking at the moment of Tabitha Quillon, but what do you think?

@rochellaine

They definitely would have been able to see each other much better then, because yeah, they weren’t really enclosed. I’m also trying not to overload the story with pilot jargon, and that’s kind of hard.

That’s good. Are Chara and Uncle Bill out of hospital yet?

@rochellaine

I don’t know, I’m just terrible at writing descriptions of people fighting each other, especially when it’s not a duel with swords or anything, its more impersonal.

No, I haven’t, but I might have heard of it.

Cool! And how’s that going? Hopefully better than my dogfighting.

@rochellaine

Hello! I’m currently trying to edit/rewrite a dogfighting scene (not, like, an actual dogfight, but aeroplanes fighting each other).

I’m terrible at fight scenes, so it’s not coming along very well. You?

@seekjustice I’m gonna have to go now. I might be on tomorrow 🙂

@seekjustice I’m back! are you still here?

@jenwriter17

Yep, I’m likely to be on later 😀

Oh my goodness I’m sorry @seekjustice! I just popped on and left. Will you be on later?

actually sorry no I can’t write right now. I might be on later though.

@jenwriter17

I’m editing my novella currently!

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder Anyone writing?

@sarah-anson Those are so good!!! I especially like the first one 🙂

ooh someone tag me! 😀

@rochellaine

Oh, good! I worry overly much about whether I’ve offended people and feel the need to apologise until I get to the point where I’m apologising for apologising. 😛

I’m sad for your computer by the way 🙂 I hope its okay *sends encouraging hugs to the computer*

@sarah-anson Oh I didn’t know you read it! (or maybe I did but I forgot) 😀 Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

I just gave you access for chapter 6, and the other links should be earlier in this topic. 🙂 thank you!

@skredder Stellar! I should be able to start reading it some time tonight 🙂 I think the pace you’re putting the links out is good, since I’m reading for Seekjustice too.

@rochellaine

By the way, sorry if I sounded a bit rude in my last post. Sometimes I just say exactly what I think. So sorry about that 🙂

@rochellaine

Sorry 🙁

Good night!

@rochellaine

No, I haven’t, but that sounds pretty cool! I like when you can do that sort of thing to a story!

They get older in the sequel, but I wouldn’t say that they were grown up. Well, the fact is, Curdie in the book is more mature than most twenty-year-olds. But still Irene is……..she’s never been my favourite character in the first p…[Read more]