Audrey Caylin

@dekreel So. True. That last face though… 😀 😀 😀

@ariella-newheart  Heheh, thank you!!

@alia  What do you mean “too soon?”

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@valtmy

I’m just disappearing, but I might be back on later this afternoon. Happy writing!

@jenwriter17

Bye!

@rochellaine

Are you on today or are you studying?

@jenwriter17

I love quirky POVs 😀 So much fun!

Pretty good! I’m almost at the end of part 2, which means I’m roughly halfway through Stars Fill Infinity.

@seekjustice Sorry, I have to go now 🙁 I might be on next week, but I’m not certain. Bye, and happy editing!

@seekjustice going well; I forgot how much fun it was to write in this quirky character’s POV 😉

how’s your editing going?

@jenwriter17 I approve whole-heartedly!!

How’s your rewriting going?

@seekjustice yeah, same here. *raises pen (and knitting needle)* We must break from this cliche and change the world of contemporary fiction! 😀

@jenwriter17

Well, thank you 😀 And yes, its not so much the character trait, but more the normalisation of it. That’s what makes me mad.

@seekjustice Yes, I see what you mean. Yeah you handled that well about Chessy 🙂

@jenwriter17

Yes, its crazy! I hate it very much. 😐

Well, I don’t necessary have a problem with her being disrespectful or disobeying her parents. My problem comes when the character never changes and its shown to be okay. After all, Chessy can be pretty disrespectful and disobedient toward her father, but I hope that I portrayed that to be bad…[Read more]

@seekjustice Oh I know! Those kinds of characters are everywhere, like it’s necessary for contemporary novels.

Actually, that reminds me, I was gonna probably post the first chapter of the novella for people to critique. The reason being that the MC Danni can overreact and all that, but I don’t want her to sound disrespectful to her parents and…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

I always liked reading those stories! The more modern ones tended to get on my nerves though (an excuse for disobedient and rebellious girls to one-up everyone else), but I’d love to see a Christian version of those sorts of stories.

Nice pinterest board, by the way.

@seekjustice kinda 😛 knowing me, it’ll probably turn into more of a horse story then I planned 😉 But yes, the character learns to not be afraid of horses and eventually learns to ride. 🙂

We inherited a farm.

I could hardly believe the news my parents gave me one not-so-sunny afternoon. They seemed totally ecstatic about the idea of living on a farm like they used to when they were growing up, but in my opinion, city life was the only way to go. Forget about fresh air and wide open spaces!

Once we finally make that dreaded move…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

Cool! It sounds interesting. 😀 Is it a “horse story”?

@seekjustice WHOAH that came out weird! I’ll try to repost it…

oh my yes Pinterest can be so deadly 😉

@seekjustice here’s the blurb (written in first person; my first time, so tell me what you think 🙂 )

 
<p style=”text-align: center;”>We inherited a farm.</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>I could hardly believe the news my parents gave me one not-so-sunny afternoon. They seemed totally ecstatic about the idea of living on a farm like they…[Read more]