Ariella Newheart

Hmmmm… everyone made some pretty good suggestions. I would go for the one @graciegirl suggested, with having the master’s job be his title. Or, maybe, if the hypothetical master wasn’t a “master”, more like a guy-who-has-an-apprentice, he could be called a journeyman?

Wow! This is deep! I’ve never thought of this before. Perhaps, though this might not work, the prince and princess would be actually lying, saying they were relatives of the family or whatever you were going to have them say. The family maybe doesn’t know that the MCs are saying this for a while, and when they find out about it they teach them…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! A thousand congratulations! (And lots of confetti…)

Hello, @graciegirl @lifeofkatie @dragon-watcher !
Glad to see you!

@lifeofkatie Sorry I’m late, but thanks! KP is awesome!

Thank you so much, @daeus! I will work on it!

Thank you so much! I thought that might be the problem, but I’m not entirely sure how to slow it down without adding a whole bunch of useless filler. One problem with my writing is that almost everything I write is my role play on Aetherlight, and I don’t need to do character development or things like that on there. Mostly it is just dialogue and…[Read more]

Chapter 1
Fire in Tirnagh

Amber straightened, putting her hands on her back and stretching. The bright Tirnagh sun, unshaded by any trees, beat down on her mercilessly. She basked in the heat, glorying in the sunlight, drawing in the heat. Then she relaxed and shook…[Read more]

An elf, streaking through the woods. She stops at a strangely-shaped house and knocks at the large barn door. It is opened by a beautiful centaur with her two-month old filly at her side. The centaur is shocked to see an elf at her door.
The elf shoves a bundle into her arms. A human baby! The centaur opens her mouth to ask the stranger who…[Read more]

All I have is two chapters, anyway @daeus. And the chapters are only 2 1/2 pages long. Should I post it here?

@daeus or @aratrea I think there’s something wrong with my book so far. I’m pretty sure it has to do with characterization, but I can’t put my finger on what exactly is wrong. Can you guys read through it or something, and help me figure it out?

@daeus I would like to get my book series traditionally published, but I don’t know what even to do. I literally know nothing about the process, or what I do to get my books to a publisher, or really anything related to the subject. I am a LONG way from getting published (I just started the second chapter of the first book today) but I would…[Read more]

Thank you, @salome01w4g. I’m not used to being on here yet! 🙂

Thank you, @salom01w4g. I’m not used to being on here yet! 🙂

Uh, hello. I’m guessing this is the Random Anything for the KP world?
Anyhoo.
Does anyone who has a book actually written and published (not self-published) have any suggestions for an aspiring teenage fantasy writer who has no idea whatsoever what she’s doing in the area of publishers? Thank you.