Ariella Newheart

Thanks, XD.
1. Not original? Ok, I can work with that.
2. Um…not really sure how I can fix that. But a lot more action happens after this particular section.
3. NO! DID I INOFO-DUMP?! I really tried not to…where?
4. Oh. Kay. I’ll see what I can do about that.
5. Oh, you ain’t seen nothin’ yet. If you had read the outline thingy on the first…[Read more]

https://www.canva.com/design/DACkNk_RzL8/VD1CsbSmOlMFwR0s6XTIkA/edit?category=tACZChfZug8

I tried that Canva website, and played around with it. I got this.

Won’t be the finished product, but I does look pretty cool.

Just on the last page, @xonos-darkgrate. Thanks! That’s actually a really good idea…I’m goin’ tae think on that.

WOW! Thanks, @kate-flournoy! I do have some questions…

I wanted to possibly go for something such as a hand with fire coming out of it, with maybe my “Emblem of the Chosen” somewhere. Either that or something combining a leaf and fire. (Since, you know, Leaf-boy and Ember-girl) Is that complatible with your guidelines?

Ok, so I am having a hard time with some details. In particular,

Is having two moons cliche? I wanted to have two moons, (especially since the second book involves the moon as an important factor) but I’ve already read several books with that particular setup, and am now wondering if it would be overused.

Help?

@xonos-darkgrate I would absolutely love it if you read those two samples, and tell me the pros and cons of each one. I will leave you to it, Sir Magistrate of the RS. (hehe, no one here knows what that is…)

@allison-grace I have the same name on everything (Aislinn is my pseudonym of choice for ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING!) and sometimes I get really confused…at Bright Lights last week, we were doing an icebreaker type activity, and I accidentally said, “Hi! I’m Aislinn!” instead of my real name! *embarrassed*

@jane-maree Those are brilliant! Love, love, love. 😉

@emily and @shannon
I’ll pray! Have a great time!

GOODNIGHT, KINGDOM PEN!!!
I am going to bed.
My nice, soft, warm bed…..

Cool, @catwing! Hmmm…I think maybe you could either put another sentence at the end, or change that last sentence a little bit. It sounds sort of awkward (to me at least) when you say it out loud. Other than that, IT REALLY MAKES ME WANT TO READ IT!!!! Please finish it soon and publish it and let me read it!!!!

I….have all of those @allison-grace. Especially the one about the forums…I am currently (meaning right this very second) on KP, Aetherlight forums, and NaNoWriMo. My alternate realities keep getting tangled…

I actually wasn’t writing this whole time. Sorry…..

@that_writer_girl_99 I’m here! Writing…again.

AAAAGHH! Blowhorn! Dragon! What!??!?

I’m going to bed. I’ve written, let me see…2,909 words so far. That’s a good start right?

*snore* GOODNIGHT, KINGDOM PEN!!!! For Rohan! For Leifer! For Narnia! For the Shire!
FOR MY NICE SOFT WARM BED!!!!!

*thump*

Yes, yes. I just can’t think of anything else at this particular point…the birthday presents…*snore* Wha? Sorry.
Seriously, Ace. It’s not even 9 yet! How are you tired, ya neeb!?

I don’t know…now can you leave me alone? I’m trying to write…*snooze*….

I’ve noticed I keep using hand-size-references at this particular point in my book.
Should I not be? *almost falls asleep at computer*

@kate-flournoy I accept that very solemn promise. And will hold you to it. I expect at leats one bucket of sage advice on the morrow.

Ok, thanks @daeus. I did want to do it myself, because *I don’t want to spend money if I don’t need to* but I’m not sure how to go about it. @kate-flournoy? Little help?