Ariella Newheart

@emily  Yeah, I wondered about those parts…thanks for the feedback!

@daughteroftheking  *strokes chin*  Perhaps, child, perhaps. 😉

*flies in on a gravity-defying contraption not nearly as cool as @daughteroftheking‘s*

@emily  I’m sort of working on my WIP while doing other things… 🙂

@dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @daeus @anyone

@daeus Wow. That was great! I loved your symbolism. And I have yet to reach that level of depth with my character portrayals. 😁 Fantastic job! 😃😃

@0-0enyali0-0 Coolio. 😄😄 I felt like it was the best way for my story to go, but yeah, I was worried about the young’uns, so glad to hear your opinion! 😉

Boy, I’m putting my character in an thrillingly awful emotional spot…I’ll probably cry writing the scene with the Scarlet Man… 😔 😣😭

*swirls cape and travels to Middle-Earth*

*hits Black…[Read more]

@dekreel Nice! It looks good! And WOOWOO can’t wait!!! 😁

Um… @0-0enyali0-0

@daughteroftheking  Congrats!! See you later! 😉

WHEW! I’ve done it! The new and improved Aethasia! *slams map on table* What do you think? anything else I need to change?

@lady-iliara  @aislinn-mollisong  @silverclaw-bonnetfolly  @destiny  @O-O-enyali-O-O @other-aethasians

@daughteroftheking  Sounds like a lot to me! Honestly I could barely do 50 words a day!

@daughteroftheking You can do it!! How many words do you have?

@daughteroftheking  Hmm… I think I’ll go over my KPA plans (yet again.) I think I have pre-writer’s-block-writer’s block 😛 lol. What about you?

@daughteroftheking  I don’t know about @winter-rose… But I’m here!

@lady-iliara Sorry, I didn’t see this until now!! That’s a great question. Honestly, I think that sounds emotionally stirring, and scenes with the Scarlet Man always make me shiver with awe!! I think it all depends on how they die. If you write out the whole scene in which they get killed with details and everything, I can see that as drastic, but…[Read more]

Okayyy, that was a bit long and complicated…

@supermonkey42  It can be confusing if the story isn’t written with good transisions in between 1st and 3rd person. Since the story is mainly in 1st person, I think it should be based upon what the character knows.

When you have a section that’s in 3rd person, you could have the character say, “While I was doing this or while I was at that place…[Read more]

@emily Yeah, I’m excited to announce it. 🙂  Wel, I’m going to sign off from here, but I’ll still be around the kingdom 😉

Thanks, @sam-kowal! Oh, and sorry about your furniture XD  Ever considered making an allowance just for furniture for times like these?

WHOA, Stan, what a fire! I think it is a record!

@emily Okay. I have officially chosen the main characters… So yeah, very productive XD