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@hallie-jean I’m glad you’re doing better.🙂❤️ No problem, girl.<3

😄 Yep! Thank you!!! I’m a bit nervous for it though. I have no idea what it will be like.

Glad to hear!🙂 I know what you mean. The beginning is the hardest for me to write too. I often skip the beginnings and come back to them later. Haha, no worries! Rambling is da…[Read more]

Ooh, thanks for tagging me!! I like the idea for this topic!

@abigail-m Thank you!!

@gracie-j THAT is BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I love that sooo much!!! I believe that God can use our poetry if we let Him, and I can see Him working in yours <333

@joy-caroline Aww, thank you girl!!

Also I’m sorry it took so long to reply! I live in Texas and we just had a really bad cold storm (which is suuuper unusual XD) that…[Read more]

I’d love to critique!! Good luck with your book <3

@writerlexi216 Yeah that’s fine! Write with you soon!

@scripter-of-kingdoms Hahaha XD Yup pretty much XD Also sorry I took so long to respond, our power went out for a week because we had a really bad storm/freeze.

@issawriter7

@nova21

Sounds good, I’ll leave the grammar edits on the suggestions bar:)
Lioness’s first chapter is just SO intriguing, I’d love to read more if you decide to post the second chapter!

@issawriter7

Ah, that’s amazing! Cedulnians? They sound sooo interesting:)

@devastate-lasting

I love those collages, they are amazing! 😀

@hallie-jean Wow!!!! Your pirate graphic looks sooo cool!!!!!!! 🙂

@devastate-lasting Your graphics look amazing!!!!! I love the color schemes!! 🙂

@issawriter7 I love your graphic of Amadeo!!! It looks incredible!!!!! 🙂

@abigail-m

YAY!!!!  I’m SO glad you like it!!!!! ❤  You can make the edits on the doc if you want to–I’d appreciate it, but I just meant that it wasn’t a big deal to me, at least, not as much as the story itself.  Thanks so much for your kind words!!! 😃

@nova21

Hey Jodi!!!  I’m Ella, and welcome to KP!!!!!!!!!!

A few things about me:

1)  I write fantasy, thriller/suspense, and speculative fiction.

2)  I love smoothies ❤

3)  I’m play basketball and I’m super into running and working out 🏀

My current WIP #1 is a fantasy about an outcast girl trying to save her sister from a horrible eng…[Read more]

@hallie-jean

Ooh yes! I saw that collage, it was sooo good:) I like Daren already!

@jodi-maile

Hi Jodi! Welcome to KP!
I’ve heard of Prydain chronicles before and they sounded extremely interesting:) What’s your favorite thing about them?
I usually write in many different genres, but I absolutely LOVE fantasy! What is your favorite setting to write in?
It is awesome to have you here! 😀

@nova21

In answer to all four questions: yes!
It was excellent! I’m so curious about Nova Terra and the MC. I was hooked all the way through and I love Emiyn’s sarcasm! It’s an amazing piece 😀 The only edits I’d make have to do with grammar:)

@gracie-j

Wow! That helps me out much more than you know:D

That is such an excellent point that depending on who’s POV I’m using, the way things are seen and described will appear different. I never thought of that before:) Also, I appreciate you putting together the example pieces, I definitely see what you mean about using shorter sentences…[Read more]