Ariel Ashira

@seekjustice Shop Around the Corner from 1940 with James Stewart.  Cute and sweet story interlaced with hilarious one-liners.

@rochellaine

I am actually! But I’ll be going in five or ten minutes, so I might disappear mysteriously. What did you watch?

@seekjustice I’m sorry, I was having a sort of “movie night” with my brother and parents.  Now I’m done, though – two hours after you posted. 😀  Are you still here?

@rochellaine

I’m certain that I replied to your post yesterday but it seems I didn’t!

However if you’re still around, I just need to go do some washing up and then I’ll be back

@notawriter

Cool! The character’s name is Rin. She’s kind of an independent and serious person.  Here’s a picture so you can kinda see what her hair looks like.

Her hair was one reason I had trouble drawing her, ’cause of the light color and dark roots. Sorry those weird sunglasses are covering her eyes, but my character has brown…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper okay, thanks!

@rochellaine Genius. Absolutely genius.

@introvert_girl

I usually like to start my sequels (I’ve only started one sequel…sooo….) by focusing on a scene that actually entails the villain. What he’s after. Especially if you’re villain has already been introduced in the first book.

I also like to have some sort of initiative on the villain’s part. There’s something needing to be…[Read more]

@mariposa Seriously. All these songs….

And that collage. O.O I wish to now read this book. Is it kinda like Jurassic Park/World, or something else. Was there time travel??

@daughteroftheking That quote. Is. So. Poetic.

@livgiordano Yeah. I appreciated that so much. Takes a lot of courage. And humility, especially after winning the superbowl against the Patriots.

@sam-kowal Let’s just go with the Eagles. 😉

@epicaddie2 Just remember that 85% of America was cheering with you. 😛

Oh yeah. I did that every now and then with my first person book. Just so long as you make it clear that you’re switching, you should be fine. 😀 @jenwriter17

@rochellaine  That is interesting that everyone likes Oliver so much! If you don’t like Oliver maybe Owen would be a good fit? It kind-of has the same feel in my opinion.

@jenwriter17 Aw thankyou!
I don’t think I would do it tonight but Id love to draw your character 🙂 Could you tell me a bit about them? ^-^

@rochellaine I’m so sorry it’s taken me so long to read your story! it’s been a busy couple weeks.

I really liked Chara, she struck me as being down-to-earth. And I liked that you made her short and made it that she didn’t have complete confidence in herself; it made her even more relatable. Overall, I really liked what you have so far! 😉

@notawriter that is so good!

if you’re interested I was gonna ask someone to draw one of my characters for me. would you want to?

@rochellaine That’s so neato! 😀 Was it hard to find an illustrator?
Hmm, to me it just feels like a name for a very cute and sweet character, who’s also very down to earth. Though Like I said. I’m biased.

I hope you find a name you like! 😉

@rochellaine Truly impressive.

@jess-penrose It could… Drawing from your first answer, what about adjusting the focusing question to something like, “When can you lose your right to freedom?” and tweaking the alternate answers slightly. Approaching it from that angle doesn’t make the right answer seem quite as obvious (since you have criminals who break the law and…[Read more]