Ariel Ashira

@pickupyourpenandwrite Of course! I’m sorry that you are going through all of that. I will definitely be praying for you!

@dekreel

“As a warning, I have a knack for melting chairs. Or else, why would you have a stool?”

😃😝

Most likely my favorite part. Hands (paws, 🐶) down!

@dekreel It was actually pretty well done.  Since you’ve already had a lot of advice from others about story structure and characters, I’ll just note a couple of editing comments.

First of all, I think you need to do a little more research on helicopters.  The first thing that struck me was the large size of the helicopters you were d…[Read more]

@waterlily Hi! you may have gotten all the advice you need, but I thought I’d put in a link for some articles on…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper @sage-g @dekreel @pretty-much-any-other-artists

I have a new character! It’s an elf from my new short story (WIP) called Ualair Fencaryn. He has mid-back (if that’s a word) long blond hair, green eyes, and sharp, angular eyebrows. He has a hawk-like, thin, angled face. He is thin but muscular. He usually wears a green-brown tunic…[Read more]

@dekreel This is so cool!!! I love it ❤😉

@ariella-newheart I know I’ve seen you around on the forums, but I don’t know if I officially said hello.

So……..HELOOOOO! 😜

@christianna-hellwing Welcoooome! I’m sure you’ll absolutely love it here! 😉

Well, I would give some fantasy advice……………if I had any to give. I’m kinda new to fantasy myself. 😊

What are your favorite book/shows/movies? Do you have any pets?

@dekreel Phew! Thank goodness!

@dekreel CHAP is a homeschool conference in Pennsylvania.  Last year I was there with my family as vendors for our family ministry, and Josiah was there with a KP booth.

@skredder  Haha! My sibling and I used to play with the chess pieces like that! Give them voices and all that jazz X)

@kaya-young Oh, oh…don’t ask!  I’m trying, but it’s not going as fast as I would like.

By the way, I haven’t even found out what happens to her yet! 😀  I’ve done a very little bit of outlining, but mostly I just write as I go and see what comes out. (Which is sometimes a good thing – and sometimes a very bad thing.)

@ariella-newheart  AHHHHHHHH!   I love her so much!  My favorite part is her eyes.  And the dress…absolutely perfect.  🙂

@perfectfifths *confused* Um, yeah.  That part was supposed to be a joke too…I’ve known the song since I was a little kid, and there’s a part about if the “straw be too long”.  😀

I was meaning after you finish sewing, you’ll eventually have to cut the thread, or it will be hanging all over the place and look silly.

I wonder if the hole in the…[Read more]

@perfectfifths What if the thread be too long? 😀 Ohhh, I just realized that’s a pun!

Love it! 🙂  Thanks for playing!

@dekreel Oh my gosh! I did that but with a chess game. Well, sort of. I wrote a short story from the point of view of the chess pieces. I thought it was funny at the time. Needs a lot of polishing now.

You know you’re a writer when you see a stranger with a cast and proceed to come up with fifty stories of how they got the cast.

@dekreel Of course you had to end it there!

I rather enjoyed it. Based on other books I’ve seen, I’d place the target age around 8-10. It’s a good story, kinda simple, but similar in style to other books I’ve read for the 8-10 range.

Now, I’ve never seen those shows you’ve mentioned so I can’t say anything in regard to similar plots or…[Read more]