Ariel Ashira

@daeus  I need to read more! I’m in! Go for it!! 😀

And I agree with @spradlin — a chapter a week. I’m busy

I’m excited for this idea!!

Spradlin — Wait, you’re still here?! I though you left KP! 😀

@supermonkey42 Can’t remember exactly. It was either lack of involvement or I didn’t have enough time.

@supermonkey42 Bye!  Thanks for joining me!

Anyone else still here?

@supermonkey42 Changing from third person to first person in the middle of a story is not the same as changing the name of one of your characters.  That means MAJOR editing work! 😀  You’ve seriously done that?

I have written from several secondary male characters POVs, but never had one as the main character yet.  I’m going to have to learn how…[Read more]

@supermonkey I guess you could call it semi-dystopian?  Or just simply futuristic?

First person or third person?  Is your protagonist a boy or a girl? 😀  I like asking questions.

@jenwriter17 I hope so! 🙂 But I’m never sure.

@rochellaine aw, I can’t join you this time! will you be on Monday?

@supermonkey42 I wrote a book like that once.  It was supposed to be a time travel story, but focusing on the different cultures of the time periods, rather than the science of time travel.  The time travel element ended up taking over the book more than I intended…so it’s technically sci-fi now.  😀  But I set the contemporary parts in 202…[Read more]

@supermonkey42 Cool!  What genre?

I’m doing a his-fic short story I’ve had started for a while, but got discouraged from when I lost about a thousand words.  I was listening to a song today that reminded me of it, so I decided to try again. 🙂

Hellooooo…I’m writing!  Anyone around?

@seekjustice @dekreel @supermonkey42 @jenwriter17 @anyone-else

@aislinn-mollisong Which ones did you make up? If you don’t mind me asking. 🙂

@aislinn-mollisong I really like Arden! I might just steal it for a character I’m developing… *smirks*

Oh, one more question. Do you prefer the ending lines:

“Awestruck to see that in dark the lights dance”

or

“Awestruck to see that in night the lights dance”

???

Thanks everyone! @emma-flournoy @ariella-newheart @rochellaine

I think I’ve got it now. I’ll come back to this a few months from now to see if I can make any small improvements, but I think it’s generally solid. 😀

@sage-g Oh wow! This is cool! Great job on the dress and the pouch! And I have to say that I love what you did with her name! It looks really good! You did an excellent job on her hair too!

I might just have to make her dress green in the book. 🙂

@ingridrd Yes!! She is perfect! Thank you! 😀 The hair looks absolutely amazing! Thank you so much!

@skredder  Hopefully her hair is how you imagined it…and I wasn’t sure about her eyes so I just did brown.  🙂

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