Ariel Ashira

Thanks @dekreel ! I will have to remember to show, not tell.

Wow. You guys make me smile X’D

@dragon-snapper  *looks at un-melted chair* *looks at you* *looks back at chair* Whoa. Thanks, Snapper!

Also, when I read “He won’t let you go,” I almost cried. It’s so true. Have you heard that Switchfoot song, I Won’t Let you Go? That’s what came to mind. (Obviously HAHA)

@audrey-caylin  Woww, I LOVE that m…[Read more]

@kaya-young  The first part would flow much better if you separated the topics like this:

“You did a really good job with your prayer!”
“Thanks.”
Who wrote it again?”
“It was Teresa of Avalanna.”

And obviously you can put the non-dialogue parts where you find the most fitting.

At the end of the second part, maybe occasionally tell what the ch…[Read more]

@sam-kowal Thanks!

Thing One and Thing Two prancing through the halls with pots of blue dye meant for JJ

That is a most intriguing idea. 😀

@jenwriter17 That’s your first time?  Wow.  I love it!  And I read it to my sister, and she loved it too.  It’s hilarious.  But what happened to Charlie when you fainted? 😀 😀 😀

@supermonkey42 I love the…[Read more]

signing off…

@supermonkey42 *gobbles ice cream* oh my goodness isn’t homemade ice cream THE BEST?! McDonald’s McFlurries don’t have anything on homemade ice cream!

@kaya-young I’m by no means an expert on dialogue, buy yeah it looked good to me 🙂

I’m not really sure how this works, but I’m writing…

@jenwriter17  Oh, Thanks! The second one was from my WIP, but I’m not sure I’ll keep it because it has kinda taken a new direction.

There wasn’t anything you see I could improve on? Maybe it’s decent, I could have just looked at it waaay to much.

@dekreel k, bye! 🙂

@supermonkey42 yeah….I might’ve fainted too 😉

@kaya-young I thought this was good; I actually really liked the second bit 🙂

@supermonkey42 I loved this! *looks in freezer for ice cream*

@jenwriter17  Nope, I’m not writing a book. My top project right now is the KPA 😛

Welllll I have a novella. But it’s stuck fast XP

I’m signing off. See you later!

@kaya-young wow, really? thank you! <3 <3 <3

@dekreel yeah I use this topic whenever I read!

my WIP is going kinda slow, just cuz of school and life stuff (ugh). thanks for asking 🙂 Do you have a book you’re writing?

@dekreel I wasn’t going to set a time, unless everyone wanted to. We’d just post whenever we’d read the chapter, I guess.

@jenwriter17   Oh my! That was awesome!

@rochellaine …….well……here it is……my, uh, Octopus Ball poem. *hides face* This is the very first time I’ve written a poem. very. first. Don’t expect much. I probably broke some rules and maybe it all didn’t rhyme right either…….but…..here it is:

The Octopus Ball

A strange thing happened to me

on the 23rd of January.

I was at…[Read more]

Also @notawriter  I really love the word “Nextly” 😉