Ariel Ashira

@alia The most recent musical I saw was The Greatest Showman (the soundtrack is surprisingly motivating!). I’m always on the lookout for good musical recommendations. 😉 I remember watching Newsies and thinking “wow I am exhausted just watching these dance routines.” XD

@gracie-j It was actually kind of out-of-the-blue (aka God’s timing 😉 ).…[Read more]

leaving for about an hour

@jenwriter17, I would never take a long time to respond…heh heh heh

I’m glad you got some good feedback

Sadly no, though I have discovered that there is an Ever After musical, so I might hunt down that soundtrack sometime soon. Currently I am still obsessed with Newsies and The Clockmaker’s Daughter. How about you?

@gracie-j well just tag me…[Read more]

@alia Sorry it took me so long to respond! I got lost in my story. 🙂

Yup, I did! Her feedback was so great! I’m so glad professional editors exist lol XD

Watch any good musicals lately?

(fyi for anyone, I will be writing off and on all day)

@jenwriter17, Cool! Editing is soooo much fun on a tight schedule. You had a professional editor look at it, right?

Thank you! I have both the 1st and 2nd draft open at once, and I realized that already the 2nd draft has a much darker, but more plot appropriate tone to it

@alia Yup, I’m working on Ignite. 🙂 It’s going to be a different document that I’m going to send beta readers. Frantically trying to finish these edits in time to send it out to the beta reading team on Monday. XD

Ooh, I LOVE that first page! So much conflict already and it’s so gripping!

@devastate-lasting

I got Dan Brown, Stephan King, and George Orwell (I wanted to see how many different ones I could get from one sample. Apparently the beginning is Orwell, middle is Brown, and ending is King from the 7 paragraphs used)

@jenwriter17

here’s the first page of my WIP. thoughts?

Everyone knelt, the white fog weighing heavy around them. Jycin could feel his legs growing stiff in the cool damp air, but he dared not move. They would be coming at any moment and he didn’t have the luxury of playing with fate. He closed eyes and tried to distract himself with thoughts of…

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@jenwriter17,

Hey! You working on Ignite? Also, is it the same doc as before that you have us beta reading? or am I just missing it?

@alia I’ll be around for a bit, also open to chatting about anything. 🙂

@jenwriter17, @rochellaine, @seekjustice (you’re probably asleep…I’m too lazy to look up what time it is for you though so just in case I shall tag you), @valtmy (same), @gracie-j, @dekreel, @catwing, @anyone-else

I’m writing! Anyone want to word war, chat musicals, chat plot, chat deaths, or chat about literally anything?

@r-m-archer Thanks!

@gracie-j Thank you! Also my synopsis…

Jycin is a simple weaver in a simple village. Or at least he was. But when his sins lead to the choice of joining the hated priests or have his family killed, he discovers there is a much bigger world than he could have dreamed of. Faced with the future of losing his daughter, Jycin…

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@e-k-seaver

I’ll do what I can!

@godlyfantasy12 Ditto what Linyang said. I’m no good with languages. 😉

OH MY WORD I love the designs in your shop! *heart eyes* I’ll definitely be spreading the word about this (including in my next monthly newsletter). 🙂

This is really cool! 😀 I got Agatha Christie too!

@gracie-j I actually have to hop off now. Thanks for chatting with me! 😀 Happy writing!

@gracie-j

Ooh, that sounds really cool!