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@savannah_grace2009

I really like the changes you’ve made to the prologue!

One typo I noticed, it should be Sevryn here:

“Where will we go?” Selena looked up at him with the brokenness of a small child, and the sight of his wife breaking broke something inside of him.

@savannah_grace2009

Aw, you’re welcome girl ❤️

I can’t believe how I’ve matured since then, in a little over six months. God has really been working in my life, both in my heart and in my writing!

That’s wonderful ☺️

(and you-and several others from KP-will forever be in the acknowledgment page of my novel…if you’re okay with that, that is XD)

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@acancello

HIIIIIII!!!!!

I’ve missed you a lot too!

About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?).  I was really thinking about it a few months ago and realized that I don’t want to continue. I am going to publish my current WIP after my friend finishes editing it, but I can’t see myself writing anothe…

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@savannah_grace2009

Lol, ok! Sounds good! 😂😄😄

I should probably do that too, tbh….

@rae

I actually do have a question. What does the last part of this mean? (I italicized the section in question)

On his left cheek is a singular reptilian scale, an upside down triangle with rounded corners and at an angle, in shape.

@ellette-giselle

Ah, sorry! I was just saying it was funny, not really saying to keep it or not, lol. If you were gonna change it, that’s cool too! I might not have caught something in the earlier messages. Maybe that makes sense? Lol, sorry, I didn’t mean to be confusing! 😓😅

@rae

For some reason I was imagining Tenz as blond.

Huh, it went back to normal after I posted.

@trailblazer
It’s weird on my end and I can’t leave this blank Chat Chat page.

@savannah_grace2009
OH NO I THINK IT’S WEIRD AGAIN.

(looks like I’m late to the party lol)

@ellette-giselle

I like the second version better, too, and the fountain/sword scene was funny! 😄

@rae

Two weeks sounds ok, I think I’m going to do this one. Tenz sounds fun.

@savannah_grace2009

Huh, that’s weird.

@savannah_grace2009

Looks normal to me.

@ellette-giselle

This is interesting so far! I love the idea of a historical fiction set in those earlier years! I also like your whole colosseum scene.

The main things I’m looking for at the moment would be is it intriguing, have I got a good first chapter hook. Are the characters defined, are you interested in them yet. etc. Basically all the t…

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@rae

Two weeks sounds good to me! I think that’s about the same amount of time as the first challenge.

Tenz sounds cute and cool—I’m excited to draw him!

@theshadow

Thanks!! 😄💛

@linus-smallprint

Thanks for the challenge and the constructive criticism! I had fun, too! I don’t usually draw monsters or animals of any kind, so that was a fun change from my typical teenyboppers, lol. 😄😄

@ellette-giselle

(Sorry this is late—I have a bad problem of stressing out and overthinking what I should say back… 😅)

It took me four days to write Fateful Night, but editing took several months!!

Ohh, that’s awesome!! My book has taken me over two years already and I’m nowhere near done, lol! I read your method and it sounds  quite in…[Read more]

Y’all, those look amazing!

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, I didn’t do this one, though Charles sounded really fun to draw.