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(NOTE: I did (very) little research on Dholes…. so the ones I mention are kind of my own spin off the real things…… so.. yeah)

@savannah_grace2009

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Ooo! Sounds good! I’ll definitely read yours! 😃

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

Evander

He shivered.

“The fearless kind… those dholes. They live in huge packs… and will sometimes hang around other clans of their kind. They like to chase us down, and have killed lots tigers in the past…”

He stopped, and let out a moan.

“We are to stay clear of them… and I found that out a bit too…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you for reading it!

I’m glad I’m not alone in this… struggle… lol. I might have to try spreading them out like you mentioned.

I’m very excited to share more… when I get there……perhaps half a year from now. (Just kidding, lol.) 🙃

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you for reading it and giving the advice. I really, really appreciate it!

I’m going to work on simplifying it a bit…  and I’ll see what it becomes…. 🙃

Oh, and don’t worry… nothing bad happens. lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Heh heh… Thanks for letting me know… 🙃

That was one thing I was a bit worried about, so I guess I’ll talk to my mom about it… 😁

@GRCR

Cool! I didn’t have time to read it in full detail yet, but one thing that stood out to me skimming it was the description felt a bit heavy-handed. First you describe Blair, then his room, then Shannon, and then Belle. All of them were pretty long paragraphs of just description, and it gets a bit tiring.

Anyways, just what I noticed. I’ll…[Read more]

….This literally took me FOREVER to write….

…and now, I begin outlining the second chapter… 😓

@savannah_grace2009

Hmm… strange….

I just tried to change mine… and it seems it’s not working again. ☹️

But don’t worry, KP should fix it soon.

@savannah_grace2009

Oof… Have you tried recently?

It started working again… so it should load now…

@savannah-grace_2009

Have you tried recently? It started working again for me and GRCR.

@whalekeeper

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Evander

He laughed a little. “Oh, that was no big deal…. Nice to meet you, Gus.”

His mind replayed the first several hours of his day, and terror covered his face for a short minute.

“Well, I… I swam here, to say the least. A pack of small fox-like dog-ish beasts would’ve destroyed me… jumping into the deep ocean was…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

(lol… 😏 )

Evander

“Oh…well, um…”

He looked off again, and then back at Gus.

Why am I so nervous… I’m never nervous… 

“I… well, I go by Evander–at least, thats what they call me where I come from anyway.”

He turned his head and shoulders and stared off into the distance for a second.

“….w–what’s your name?”

@keilah-h

(🧐 I’m not sure why the tag didn’t work… ^^ )

@whalekeeper @keilah-h

(are we saying Gus and Evander have come in full contact? If not… well… heh heh)

Evander

Evander’s ears perked up, and he intently looked at the creature in front of him…

He had never seen anything like it before.

Evander let out a slight laugh. “Well… thanks…. I guess…”

He sat down and waved his tail s…[Read more]

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

I’m sooo sorry I’m late…

@lydibug

You’re welcome! ☺️

Evander

His eyes locked onto a small lizard-like creature. He stared at it in amusement, and began walking over to it.

A noise somewhere close made him freeze. Despite being a large tiger, he was scared.

Evander looked around. He didn’t like things s…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

OoooOOOOOoooOOOhhHHHHHhhhhhh!! Love it!

@lydibug

Oh! That picture is soo cute! 😍