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@rae

They must’ve left the forum, that’s why their profile says anonymous. The weirdest part is that when someone leaves, their rank and number of posts stays by their posts. They only had one post.

…doing the very bravest of things…

Lol

Um… okay…

@esther-c

Ooo!! I’ll have to check it out!!

@rar

Lol your new profile pic is so confusing. I keep thinking you’re GRCR 😂

@rae

Are Fennin and the Queen still there, or did they leave? Zahlin has some words for Fennin.

@rae

No, you didn’t botch him at all.

@freedomwriter76

What a sad board…. 🥺

@esther-c

Ok! If you do wanna read the chapter, I posted it like two posts above this one.

Ooo, great!! I read it just now, and I don’t think it’s information-dumping at all!

Oh yeah, ok. That’s true. Sometimes I feel like there’s a lot of writers saying to have some kind of action in the first chapter, and others saying that you just need to sho…

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@jonas

Ok I guess…

@jonas

He seems rather OP lol.

Zahlin

Zahlin slowly nodded and extended his hand to pull Nahim to his feet. “Peace of Honor.”

Now that his adrenaline was wearing off, pain flared in his various wounds. Zahlin slumped against the wall and slowly slid down to the ground, breathing heavily.

Footsteps pounded in the hallway. The door swung open.

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Ok, this is taking too lon…[Read more]

@jonas

I guess we are. I have a character I might add…

I guess I’ve been stuck on what Zahlin should do now… 🤷‍♀️

@srae

Yes, I’m writing an RP now… how do you guys write them so fast? 😅

@esther-c

I don’t want to make a whole other topic for this, so I’m posting my question(s) here. XD

lol XD

It is hard to say much without knowing much of your book, but I do agree with what Sara said as far as openings…

I guess it depends on the reader, but personally, I like books that paint some of the picture in the first (and even seco…[Read more]

@rae

I have to go now, bye.`