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@acancello @savannah_grace2009

Great idea!! 😆 A masquerade ball would be sooo fun!!

@savannah_grace2009

Those were kinda what I was thinking too… costume party sounds fun…

We could also do a karaoke party (basically, a singing party)… no clue how that would work though…

Or we could smash a bunch of parties together, and do lots of them at once… (I’m kidding and not at the same time)

Change of plans… I’ll have to share mine later…

@savannah_grace2009

Ooo great! 😃 I’ll share my character, but I can’t RP right now. One question, what kind of party is it?

@trailblazer

(Sorry this is a bit late)

Thanks for reading it and for all the advice!

I was afraid it would be a bit boring in the beginning, so those are great ideas. I’ll talk to my mom and see what she thinks. 😄

@savannah_grace2009

You’re welcome! 😄

(NOTE: I did (very) little research on Dholes…. so the ones I mention are kind of my own spin off the real things…… so.. yeah)

@savannah_grace2009

😊

Ooo! Sounds good! I’ll definitely read yours! 😃

@keilah-h @whalekeeper

Evander

He shivered.

“The fearless kind… those dholes. They live in huge packs… and will sometimes hang around other clans of their kind. They like to chase us down, and have killed lots tigers in the past…”

He stopped, and let out a moan.

“We are to stay clear of them… and I found that out a bit too…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you for reading it!

I’m glad I’m not alone in this… struggle… lol. I might have to try spreading them out like you mentioned.

I’m very excited to share more… when I get there……perhaps half a year from now. (Just kidding, lol.) 🙃

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you for reading it and giving the advice. I really, really appreciate it!

I’m going to work on simplifying it a bit…  and I’ll see what it becomes…. 🙃

Oh, and don’t worry… nothing bad happens. lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Heh heh… Thanks for letting me know… 🙃

That was one thing I was a bit worried about, so I guess I’ll talk to my mom about it… 😁

@GRCR

Cool! I didn’t have time to read it in full detail yet, but one thing that stood out to me skimming it was the description felt a bit heavy-handed. First you describe Blair, then his room, then Shannon, and then Belle. All of them were pretty long paragraphs of just description, and it gets a bit tiring.

Anyways, just what I noticed. I’ll…[Read more]

….This literally took me FOREVER to write….

…and now, I begin outlining the second chapter… 😓

@savannah_grace2009

Hmm… strange….

I just tried to change mine… and it seems it’s not working again. ☹️

But don’t worry, KP should fix it soon.

@savannah_grace2009

Oof… Have you tried recently?

It started working again… so it should load now…

@savannah-grace_2009

Have you tried recently? It started working again for me and GRCR.