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@rae

Uh…stars, that’s weirdly stated. Sorry, it basically means the triangle scale is at an angle.

Ah, ok.

@loopylin

I love that

@ellette-giselle

Oh, awesome! I would love to have a character drawn 🙂 It might take me a bit to decide which one, though.

@savannah_grace2009

I love it ❤️ that’s so kind of you (:

@savannah_grace2009

I really like the changes you’ve made to the prologue!

One typo I noticed, it should be Sevryn here:

“Where will we go?” Selena looked up at him with the brokenness of a small child, and the sight of his wife breaking broke something inside of him.

@savannah_grace2009

Aw, you’re welcome girl ❤️

I can’t believe how I’ve matured since then, in a little over six months. God has really been working in my life, both in my heart and in my writing!

That’s wonderful ☺️

(and you-and several others from KP-will forever be in the acknowledgment page of my novel…if you’re okay with that, that is XD)

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@acancello

HIIIIIII!!!!!

I’ve missed you a lot too!

About the Pinterest board, well I think I’m done with writing (for now, but who knows?).  I was really thinking about it a few months ago and realized that I don’t want to continue. I am going to publish my current WIP after my friend finishes editing it, but I can’t see myself writing anothe…

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@savannah_grace2009

Lol, ok! Sounds good! 😂😄😄

I should probably do that too, tbh….

@rae

I actually do have a question. What does the last part of this mean? (I italicized the section in question)

On his left cheek is a singular reptilian scale, an upside down triangle with rounded corners and at an angle, in shape.

@ellette-giselle

Ah, sorry! I was just saying it was funny, not really saying to keep it or not, lol. If you were gonna change it, that’s cool too! I might not have caught something in the earlier messages. Maybe that makes sense? Lol, sorry, I didn’t mean to be confusing! 😓😅

@rae

For some reason I was imagining Tenz as blond.

Huh, it went back to normal after I posted.

@trailblazer
It’s weird on my end and I can’t leave this blank Chat Chat page.

@savannah_grace2009
OH NO I THINK IT’S WEIRD AGAIN.

(looks like I’m late to the party lol)

@ellette-giselle

I like the second version better, too, and the fountain/sword scene was funny! 😄

@rae

Two weeks sounds ok, I think I’m going to do this one. Tenz sounds fun.

@savannah_grace2009

Huh, that’s weird.

@savannah_grace2009

Looks normal to me.

@ellette-giselle

This is interesting so far! I love the idea of a historical fiction set in those earlier years! I also like your whole colosseum scene.

The main things I’m looking for at the moment would be is it intriguing, have I got a good first chapter hook. Are the characters defined, are you interested in them yet. etc. Basically all the t…

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